I've enjoyed the story so far. It has a nice mix of MCU movies and other sources without feeling like too chaotic. And the MC's plotline isn't directly following one media source: the author is inserting this character into the universe without him being a "replacement" of an existing character or only using one show/comic as the source, which is a common pitfall for these types of stories.

The MC has an enjoyable personality. He's not too passive and begins to be proactive once he has the power to. He's not attempting to "keep the plot from the Marvel Universe" and has no problem making changes, which is a nice difference from many stories. The MC does very quickly become OP and the focus of the main story characters begins to center around him.

My biggest complaint about the story is perfectly shown in chapter 60. The MC finishes up the main fight against the arc's villain and has rescued the civilians with the help of some teammates he didn't have a great relationship with, which is good thematically for the story. But off to the side, Magneto and the Brotherhood were in the city and also fought the enemy separately from the MC's group. The MC goes over and self righteously monologues at Magneto, and then fights him, with stereotypical "You dare!"'s being thrown around. There was no reason for MC to get involved at all but the story doesn't let a chance for the MC to "look cool" / get a speech in / "be the strongest in the room" go by without taking advantage of it. It quickly starts to become a bit too "wish fulfilment"-y for me.

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Akabane

Status: c65

Sep 8, 2022

As a pc user I thank you. This has a little of every thing, a little dark, some comedy, lots of action and even more revenge.

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zen0

Status: chapter 139

Feb 21, 2023

Starting was good but got boring.

He is alot more powerful than enemy but doesn't use his full power when fighting. Enemies randomly appearing while he is just living his life or he suddenly go and find them.

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ehmed

Status: chapter 116

Jan 11, 2023

On any other story, id gives this type of story a 2-3 stars but the way the Author has written the Characters without it going to far from MCU canon or Marvel comics is Amazing. Sure most power-leveling stories get boring when the MC is overpowered but instead of relying on pure action and fighting stronger and stronger foes this Storie's MC has an actual brain and doesn't go immediately after the Thanos or any of the Big baddies.

There are plans and these plans sometimes work and sometimes they don't work But its still refreshing to read through them. Instead of having a goody-two-shoes char or the edgiest teen, the Author made the MC human which is refreshing. MC also isn't a creep and tries to f**k every woman above 18 and form a harem. The romance is put on the back burner (for now)

Spoiler

Currently MC is romancing Orroro but isn't a creep. Romance is developing slowly which is deffo refreshing

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Anyways a good 4 Star story, a good read!

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Kurumi69

Status: chapter 173

Feb 18, 2023

Very nice Marvel fanfic. You can really tell the author did his homework for his fanfic.

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T20

Status: c39

Oct 11, 2022

I'm extremely reluctant to give this more than 3 but.. just because I related to the m.c. and reading him monologue is triggering my depression is not reason enough to shun a decent story, so here v go.....

The story is Too verbose for my taste. Honestly I'd say the book is in the wrong platform cause it reads like something I'd buy with money and sit down to read...

Unfortunately I'm a play it on the background and go about my day kinda reader, the verbosity helps in that aspect what with the same thing being "shown" in 10 different ways (thankfully the author is showing & not telling that's what makes the verbosity tolerable for me). So even if I miss a few seconds I can follow what is going on...

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Update..

As the story goes on the flowery words reduce & despite the author putting heavily emphasis on m.c.'s Chapter growth his power levels ramped up real quick & the shift in tone after the first kill is refreshing

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RamRamRam

Status: epilogue

Jun 15, 2023

First of all, I must say I enjoyed reading the whole story. It got a lot of nice things going on. First he finds out he is in Marvel and move on but universe isn't having it so it affects his life and thus hist story begin. And what a story it was!

There is a lot of battles, romance, forgotten lore from Marvel. Yeah, the lore isn't currently used since like silver age. What it was? Read to find out more about it. It's no wonder nobody want to touch this, it would be a living... nightmare.

The last chapter isn't the best but at least it's not bad.

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