How he got there, the memory of his death a blur but despite that was glad to be in the Danmachi world the only thing left for him was to rise, go on adventures and experience his new life.
This is my first fanfic a Danmachi FIC with a harem of 5 that's already been decided.
I hope you give this a try and give me a fair review.
There are several problems with the grammar. Use of wrong words, misspelled words and a problem with the tenses.
Moreover, but it is not uncommon, since it's the work of a new author there are some problems. Plot holes, strange unrealistic behaviours, shallow characters...
If it wasn't for the glaring grammar, especially the errors that only need attention, it would have been 3 starts
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