By Master4thWall
[R-18, Mature Element Warning!] [Multiverse!]
A young man with a questionable job dies, eaten by a shark. To his surprise, afterlife was a spinning roulette that decided his next world and powers, with an annoyed Goddess supervising the pro
There are several problems with the grammar. Use of wrong words, misspelled words and a problem with the tenses.
Moreover, but it is not uncommon, since it's the work of a new author there are some problems. Plot holes, strange unrealistic behaviours, shallow characters...
If it wasn't for the glaring grammar, especially the errors that only need attention, it would have been 3 starts
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