Chapter 116 – Lumine’s diaryApr 11, 2023
Chapter 115 – Don’t worry Basara, I definitely won’t bore you!Apr 11, 2023
Chapter 114 – Protagonist Basara blackenedApr 11, 2023
Chapter 113 – System upgradeApr 11, 2023
Chapter 112 – Serafall makes troubleApr 11, 2023
Chapter 111 – Getting a new fiancéApr 11, 2023
Chapter 110 – New protagonist, Lumine, a traveler from another worldApr 11, 2023
Chapter 109 – These girls don’t follow the routine, heroine accidentally meets protagonist!Feb 1, 2023
Chapter 108 – Tsubaki is not a simple girl and Sona is cunningJan 29, 2023
Chapter 107 – It’s been over a month and still no progress? I have to interveneJan 28, 2023
Chapter 106 – Date and spend the night with Li YanJan 27, 2023
Chapter 105 – This girl has brain problems from eating too much garlicJan 11, 2023
Chapter 104 – Has the complaint system become stingy?Jan 11, 2023
Chapter 103 – The end of protagonist HajimeJan 6, 2023
Chapter 102 – Villains prepare drama for protagonist Hajime and his haremJan 4, 2023

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clamity101

Status: c36

Oct 13, 2022

At first, I was genuinely disappointed at dxd charcter portrayal but thanks to author amazing writing skills and light hearted comic tone of novel make it lot of fun to read. Anyway, good novel, Keep it up author

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Erubey

Status: chapter 1 – unexpected encounter

Sep 24, 2022

To be honest I have read a few similar novels with this same theme

But none of them could really compare to it

Some had too many jokes that turned it into a crackfic some of them were hundreds of chapters MC just being a melon eater on the sidelines and having the heroines being attracted to him being beaten black and blue by the protagonist and pretending to love the heroines etc

This one though really hits the spot MC is neither subservient nor overbearing my guy is just trying to live his life but when the son of the heaven comes along he wont turn the other cheek good guy

12/10

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JamesAsmodeus

Oct 2, 2022

Yep, this definitely reads like a Chinese Novel. My immersion is actually good with this one and I'm enjoying this story! 10/10, want to see the "Villain" MC slap more protagonists.

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HUntsman331

Oct 7, 2022

You know, when I read the first 15 chapters, I was tempted, oh-so tempted to give this a bad review or score, but then I continue to read and it gets better, a lot better. The way certain phrases are worded still makes it feel like a Urban Wuxia, but it has improved a lot.

The characters are more likeable now, though I still don't understand what 'straight man' is supposed to be. Obviously, there are things I don't like, an example of this is how Sirzechs doesn't seem to know about Cultivators and Qi at all, which is incredibly unrealistic considering how old he is (Guy's like 400-500 years old) and his position.

But overall, an entertaining fic. Hopefully the issue I mentioned above are explained or resolved in later Chaps, I'm currently on chapter 30.

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Ziegfreed

Status: c26

a breath of fresh air, unique use of a system and great MC. Easy to read and leaves you wanting more. Looking forward to more chapter releases.

plot_xc

Status: c109

Mar 25, 2023

even if I really didn't read a lot of novels, this one is already in my top 2.

idk why the chapters per week is 0, idk if you quit this novel but if you can please continue, or if you will keep focusing on the other novel that you are making I won't say no since I am liking it too

so please continue these novels of inner voice they are really reaaaaaaaaaly good, I can't stop read and read again and again.

the content is so good and our protagonist getting stronger and destroying the enimies life is soooo god

thx for the novel and please continue if you have time or just focus on the other novel, it will be good too and I will be happy in the end :)

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Enabi

Status: Ch-33

Sep 29, 2022

First of all let me just say thank you for the work you've put out so far, it's been very enjoyable to read I have my fingers crossed for you continuing the story. I would gladly support the story but I'm honestly living day per day atm cant afford even a dollar or anything that isn't food for the next while. So far its been pretty lighthearted despite the underlying horror of the "Protaganist Aura" and overall comedy gold. Not only did he bail out from his own novel setting in china but he escapes into another one altogether and I'm guessing hes getting a whole lot more rewards there unlike whatever he got in his previous rounds back home. Would also be nice if our MC figured out without much waiting just what they did to Issei, start having some productive ideas of how to effectively neutralize a "Protaganist" without resetting the world.

Now take what I say with a grain of salt here, but I really do think the chapters need to be quite a bit longer in order to properly add in some nuance to the story, because right now it feels like we're constantly in either quarter of a chapter in a scene or getting a half-chapter of a scene, making whatever is going on on the chapter stop abruptly over and over again.

If you're going for some kinda harem then please lets focus a bit more on our boy the MC actually interacting with the women and taking some proactive approaches to again their interest, which he's kinda doing with Rias to a lesser extent, y'know actually start out as friends and then progress from there. A good idea might be to have the MC go trough via his voiceheart and "complain" of all the horrible times he got involved with a woman on an emotional level, some info on how old he truly is, maybe some highlights of the worst situations where he not only got cucked but killed as well.

Because from what little information we have so far there's clearly quite a lot of baggage there our MC needs to get out, not only to clarify for the readers, but for himself and the heroines so he can take some kind of decision in how to properly approach women with a proper relationship being in mind. In my opinion if there's going to be a harem, I think it would be more interesting if he starts 1 with and properly develop that into something genuine, and whomever else ends up in the harem kinda do them 1 on 1 in a slow buildup kinda way. All I've said so far can kinda just be the side quest stuff or whenever theres more slice of life chapters. But maybe you've got some idea already of things falling to place as our MC gets dragged into plotpoint after plotpoint? Anyway I really do hope you continue this because its just so damn funny and I want to find out more and not just have the story get dropped without even being a quarter done like so many other fan-fincs xD But well I think my main gripe at the end of the day is the short chapter length since its a whole lot of "starting" something only for it to take several chapters to even finish a conversation or minor event, and even then due to the length of the chapters there's not really much room for any nuance or detail.

Even so though I am really enjoying it, I've only seen one other novel similar to this on Scribblehub "I gained sentience in an ero-game" or something like that. Though that one is both hilarious and kinda depressing at the same time. Mostly just kinda sad and depressing though, seriously don't read it if you're currently depressed lol.

octaru

Sep 23, 2022

Great fanfiction don't give up on it has potential 👍

DankMeeMoo

Status: c 34

Dec 4, 2022

I really like this story. I've read a couple other web novels with the concept of heroines hearing the MC's voice but I like this one the best because it feels much more relaxed. I like how slice of lifey it is.

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DragonFire2271

Status: Chapter 116 – Lumine’s diary

Mar 6, 2024

All I have to say is: THIS IS PURE GOLD

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