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Simply amazing. This story has long been posted on Webnovel, though reintroduces itself in Scribblehub.
One of the best features of this story are the dialogues and its tempo. Dialogues are seemingly tailored to each character's voices, from the choice of word up until the placement of pauses (like '...') when someone is thinking of what to speak (like IRL).
The tempo refers to duration of/between action/points of events. There are NO paragraphs long of boring monologues, nor too much boring descriptions of action to the point where we zone out of the MC's mind, NO.
IMHO, everything is spaced just right for the action (physically), monologue (mentally), and narration to exist in balance. Even the paragraphs are spaced and cut just right, NO big walls of text.
I could ramble on, but really, just give this story a try and a follow, the author really works hard and this works truly shows that. Lastly, thanks Author!
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A very Good novel, I come from WN, Also I'm the first review!
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Greatest fanfiction I ever seen don't give up on it 👍
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