Silver Walker, burned to death and sent into the MCU on his own behest, has received a new chance at life. Taking over the body of Pietro Maximoff, he plans to show the whole galaxy why exactly you should fear a speedster and add some meaning to his life. The unexpected affection towards his new twin sister wasn't something he expected, but at the same time isn't something he could ever hope to resist.
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This story is my take on what it would be like for someone to transmigrate into Pietro Maximoff, partly because I find his ending in the MCU a pity and partly because I am a great fan of his superpower.
This story contains incestuous behaviour on the Protagonist's part, as the romantic interest is Wanda Maximoff. So be warned when you read it.
There will also be very sexual language, so if you aren't of legal age, you probably shouldn't read this.
Violence, death and action are inevitable whenever a story takes place in the MCU or the Marvel Universe, so you can expect a healthy amount that as well.
The most important thing to remember though is, that if you are searching for a story with power struggles and face-slapping, you should turn around as you won't find that here.
The MC of this story is a mature adult and has his priorities straight. Fighting without a chance of success is a fool's errand, as is taking unnecessary risks.
For me this story depicts how a transmigrator should act on his advantages to survive and gain power in a place as dangerous as the MCU. There is no place for immature brats and reckless fools in such a world.
If after all this you still want to read my story, I hope you enjoy it very much and leave behind a comment or review to let me know where I could improve or what I may have forgotten.
I have no real update schedule, as this story is already finished and on my p@treon account. I will probably only upload it here occasionally, as this account isn't a priority of mine and just exists to stop others from stealing my intellectual property. (My p@treon-acc: [email protected]/GodOfFreedom; Don't forget to change the @ for an a...)
Last, but not least, I don't own anything but my own characters, as I do not own the cover image, which I found on the internet. If you are the creator and want me to take it down, just send me a message or leave a comment.
Enjoy!
The story is great but the smut tag and the content warning aren’t needed.
At the start they get together in a rushed manner that simply tosses aside any buildup or doubt and there’s an incredibly rushed s*x scene but after that it’s completely PG 13 rated. The romance and the references to s*x increase exponentially but the actual scenes are just skipped entirely. This kinda makes their relationship fall a bit flat for me as they are essentially just endlessly flirting with each other and everything that builds up to is just skipped and disappears as they go back to flirting with each other some more.
It’s written as a smutty romance story and it even talks about the smut, but the smut is missing.
I’d rate it 3.5-4 stars for the writing quality and underlying story but I’ve rounded down because I’m pessimistic.
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It's a sweet story with an overpowered protagonist and their loving partner.
The plot is a bit too fast-paced for me, especially towards the end, but it's still very enjoyable. The sentence structure is good, however, there are quite a lot of typos, it's clear that no automated spellchecking was done, and it can be distracting at times.
Also not sure I agree with the smut tag. There are quite a lot of mentions of s*x, but it's almost always FTB/censored/cut short. If just want smut, skip this, if you want a wholesome adult story, then check it out.
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It's a bit short and the pacing is fast but honestly it's a good story
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Slightly disappointed the Eternals and Earth's Celestial weren't mentioned, but a great story overall with a nice power progression - considering his OP cheats.
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great story, a fluid power escalation and a fluffy romance, although it has a lot of s*x, I finished reading it all on the webnovel and it's that kind of story with few chapters but very satisfying
the only two parts I didn't like were the following, spoiler ahead
romance very rushed, in 6 cap they already f**ked, they are brothers for God's sake, I'm not complaining about incest, I'm complaining about the instant acceptance of romance, Wanda accepts her brother as a lover without even thinking, without internal conflict, thought of going against morals, nothing, the author kind of justifies it with an "invisible bond", I found it pretty silly honestly
the second thing that bothered me was the MC's naive mentality towards weapons manufacturers, saying that the guilty is the weapon manufacturer as if it was their fault for someone taking a sword and killing everyone, weapons are simply necessary, whether for hunting to survive, or for self-defense against malicious parties, blaming the weapon manufacturer for what the user did is silly, he even confronts Stark about it, at least it was mature not to have him killed for something he didn't even know
but although I think it's a problem, it's not absurd enough to lower my rating
thanks for this story, author!
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Great short story. Entertaining and well written with minimal plot holes and no loose ends left untied.
The ending was Satisfactory (tm)
Good job author, would like to see more of your work. 4/5
Critique: didn't really read any of the smut because it was either cringe or bad because of the censorship, but it was a good flavor that made the story more vibrant even if it was left unread
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