Due to the Ministry's work in the manipulation of time, perhaps a single test that should never have been, or one that should have taken place. Whatever the small difference was, it unknowingly changed the timeline forever. A young wizard, growing up in a rich noble family of pure blood has been raised by his parents to be the perfect child. Obedient, Well-Mannered, and ready to take over his father's legacy of a potion's master in the Ministry of Magic. However, after a certain night, that young wizard's eyes were opened. With doubts of his teachings, he hid his real thoughts and opinions from his parents, sure they would punish him if he were to talk back. Now free of them after enrolling into Hogwarts, he needs only to graduate before he can disappear into his true passion of Magizoology.
If only things were that easy. Between keeping up appearances as a pureblood wizard in Slytherin, Discovering friendships, love, and finding his place in the war between good and evil there is no time to rest for Lucas Peterson.
I really disliked how all Slytherins were just 'the bad guys' in the movies I watched recently (Which this will be more based on, if you are hoping for writing as good as Harry Potter, You won't like my poor attempt). I wanted there to be more character growth in anyone from Slytherin, so I decided to make the story following the main timeline fairly closely. Please enjoy the life of a previously unborn child in the universe of Harry Potter.
Two Disclaimers! First, I do not own Harry Potter or this Thumbnail. Full Credit to the person or people responsible. (Look up Slytherin Wallpapers for thumbnail) Second, two of the female love interests will enter a same-sex relationship with one another.
- Chapter 135. Chosen ChampionsApr 13, 2024
- Chapter 134. Between The LinesApr 6, 2024
- Chapter 133. Two New SchoolsMar 29, 2024
- Chapter 132. Chiara’s PastMar 28, 2024
- Chapter 131. Mistakes / ConfusionMar 22, 2024
- Chapter 130. Forceful TransformationDec 22, 2023
- Chapter 129. Creation of S.P.E.WDec 4, 2023
- Chapter 128. House Elves in Hogwarts Part 2.Dec 3, 2023
- Chapter 127. House Elves in Hogwarts Part 1.Dec 2, 2023
- Chapter 126. Pansy’s MeddlingJun 22, 2023
- Chapter 125. Small acts of LoveJun 17, 2023
- Chapter 124. Moody’s D.A.T.D.A Class Part 2Jun 9, 2023
- Chapter 123. Moody’s D.A.T.D.A Class Part 1Jun 8, 2023
- Chapter 122. Pansy’s walk to ClassJun 1, 2023
- Chapter 121. The Next MorningMay 25, 2023
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Hello everyone who reads. What can I say about this fanfic. At first, I really liked the interesting plot and well-developed worldview. But at one fine moment, the author completely disappointed me by adding NTR. When the main character's girlfriend cheats on him with someone. Whoever the guy or girl is, she still cheats and is called NTR. I don’t understand why the author did this, because if you remove the relationship between them, the plot will not change, on the contrary, it will become better. At chapter 114, this fanfic ended for me.
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MC is supposed to be pretending to be asshole. But he's honestly an actual asshole. He acts like asshole even when he's not with audience and when it's not needed. And it's not like being Slytherin or pureblood requires him to be one anyways. Not to mention his over the top acting is totally counterproductive of him keeping people away and it's literally like chinese arrogant young master behavior. Doesn't fit HP at all.
It's so cringe, it's so unnecessary. He's not acting like an pureblood, he's choosing to be just straight up asshole. One of the most obnoxious ones at that, even worse than Malfoy, worst of the bunch at times.
And whot? Voldemort became mentor??? Voldemort definitely wouldn't mentor anyone, he would rather kill anyone with great potential as rival or hamper their growth. Voldemort literally went to kill baby Harry because of prophecy said Harry might become threat. He might take skilled people as followers, but that's if they are actually useful, as in adults, and not threat. Also he would also not risk breaking his cover
There's just couple irritating things that make no sense for me in the novel. Though it's pretty good otherwise.
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One of the best HP fics I’ve read. The pacing, romance, suspense, and world building are incredible. I look forward to how this story will develop!
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A very refreshing and interesting look at the Wizarding world of Harry Potter. And a good character cast that is interesting and new ways to solve the mystery of the school years. This is a true story for animal lovers since that is what MC is to the higesr degree!
I give the novel 4/5 since it's. Good pace but there are certain things that the MC might be off putting for some as the way he acts is very forced apon him
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Only read a few, but this will be increible. I'm going to wait until more chapters, I hope the author don't drop it.
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The best HP Fanfic I’ve read.
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Unfortunately dissapointing, if at the time of reading this review you check the chapter count and it exceeds 300 I suggest mostly ignoring my complaints. In its current state though, a serious pacing issue plagues this novel. The grammar is passable for the most part and I only sometimes found myself completely unable to understand chapters due to broken English which is on the higher ends for this site. That possibly would get better as the author writes more though so it's more of an observation than a direct complaint.
Onto the actual complaints, first and foremost the pacing and therefore misleading information on this novel. This is not a romance novel, this is not a slice of life novel, this is not a beast tamer novel, technically they are in a school and the other tags are given by default though so those aren't exactly false. The reason for none of the important ones being true though seems to primarily be the pacing, maybe 3 years from now there will be a handful of chapters with romance, maybe 13 years from now there will be some slice of life and the promised "harem" but currently there is not.
On the beast taming front, beasts are introduced simply to have them in the novel and nothing else. They exist to fill the quota so that we are distracted from the lack of beast taming novel we're reading, for the most part they exist separate from the actual novel as either a side quest or a series of cameos we visit in downtime as a replacement for all the romance we missed. I read into the triple digits and the only beast he supposedly tamed was a pet he got in some of the first chapters, we've introduced more untamed beasts than we have tamed ones.
I should dedicate a section here to the lack of romance, the issue is that it's so lacking that there simply isn't enough to complain about. It doesn't happen, nada, zilch. You might be able to consider some characters as potential romantic interests but for as far as I read the only potential romance was between two of the girls I thought would be with the MC instead. It wasn't NTR so to say because they weren't the MCs girlfriends (due to the lack of romance in this novel) but they were two of the 3 potential partners cutting down on the area the novel already lacked.
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Very good the story is amazing the plot I'm finding it very interesting, I really like the personality of the protagonist and their stories and interaction, the heroines I'm really liking them and their p Personalities I love them so much, I'm excited for more chapters
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Berry lovely manuscript, too short as usual.
This fae rates it: "A beverage not poisoned and without strings attached in the fae court" out of ten.
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Very well written story with a protagonist who grew up very sheltered and under strict parents. The divide that he has with his own ideologies and that which is expected of him is done beautifully throughout the plot. The interactions and the masks he has to wear to interact are a good point of the story. This being a original character in a Harry Potter fanfiction helps to see a nice touch of different interactions with known characters.
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