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Chapter 135. Chosen ChampionsApr 13, 2024
Chapter 134. Between The LinesApr 6, 2024
Chapter 133. Two New SchoolsMar 29, 2024
Chapter 132. Chiara’s PastMar 28, 2024
Chapter 131. Mistakes / ConfusionMar 22, 2024
Chapter 130. Forceful TransformationDec 22, 2023
Chapter 129. Creation of S.P.E.WDec 4, 2023
Chapter 128. House Elves in Hogwarts Part 2.Dec 3, 2023
Chapter 127. House Elves in Hogwarts Part 1.Dec 2, 2023
Chapter 126. Pansy’s MeddlingJun 22, 2023
Chapter 125. Small acts of LoveJun 17, 2023
Chapter 124. Moody’s D.A.T.D.A Class Part 2Jun 9, 2023
Chapter 123. Moody’s D.A.T.D.A Class Part 1Jun 8, 2023
Chapter 122. Pansy’s walk to ClassJun 1, 2023
Chapter 121. The Next MorningMay 25, 2023

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Demon546

Status: chapter 114. beginning arguments

Feb 16, 2023

Hello everyone who reads. What can I say about this fanfic. At first, I really liked the interesting plot and well-developed worldview. But at one fine moment, the author completely disappointed me by adding NTR. When the main character's girlfriend cheats on him with someone. Whoever the guy or girl is, she still cheats and is called NTR. I don’t understand why the author did this, because if you remove the relationship between them, the plot will not change, on the contrary, it will become better. At chapter 114, this fanfic ended for me.

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mukkaar

Status: chapter 18. remembrall

Nov 16, 2022

MC is supposed to be pretending to be asshole. But he's honestly an actual asshole. He acts like asshole even when he's not with audience and when it's not needed. And it's not like being Slytherin or pureblood requires him to be one anyways. Not to mention his over the top acting is totally counterproductive of him keeping people away and it's literally like chinese arrogant young master behavior. Doesn't fit HP at all.

It's so cringe, it's so unnecessary. He's not acting like an pureblood, he's choosing to be just straight up asshole. One of the most obnoxious ones at that, even worse than Malfoy, worst of the bunch at times.

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And whot? Voldemort became mentor??? Voldemort definitely wouldn't mentor anyone, he would rather kill anyone with great potential as rival or hamper their growth. Voldemort literally went to kill baby Harry because of prophecy said Harry might become threat. He might take skilled people as followers, but that's if they are actually useful, as in adults, and not threat. Also he would also not risk breaking his cover

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There's just couple irritating things that make no sense for me in the novel. Though it's pretty good otherwise.

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night_treader

Status: chapter 41. accident

Sep 19, 2022

One of the best HP fics I’ve read. The pacing, romance, suspense, and world building are incredible. I look forward to how this story will develop!

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BanTheKitten

Status: chapter 76. the tome

Oct 22, 2022

A very refreshing and interesting look at the Wizarding world of Harry Potter. And a good character cast that is interesting and new ways to solve the mystery of the school years. This is a true story for animal lovers since that is what MC is to the higesr degree!

I give the novel 4/5 since it's. Good pace but there are certain things that the MC might be off putting for some as the way he acts is very forced apon him

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LeonToralla

Status: c0

Sep 30, 2022

Only read a few, but this will be increible. I'm going to wait until more chapters, I hope the author don't drop it.

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LucasCrown

Status: chapter 60. a month after

Nov 9, 2022

The best HP Fanfic I’ve read.

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danieljoker

Status: chapter 111. beginning arguments

Jan 22, 2023

Very good the story is amazing the plot I'm finding it very interesting, I really like the personality of the protagonist and their stories and interaction, the heroines I'm really liking them and their p Personalities I love them so much, I'm excited for more chapters

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Whit3M3dusa

Status: chapter 105. last day of third...

Dec 2, 2022

Berry lovely manuscript, too short as usual.

This fae rates it: "A beverage not poisoned and without strings attached in the fae court" out of ten.

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Dakota3602

Status: chapter 115. beginning classes

Jun 19, 2023

I enjoy yur novel and The characters are really good 😀

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OogaChooga

Status: chapter 104

May 23, 2023

The characters are really good and consistent. Not really consistent with canon but consistent within this AU. The plot is fine and all I wish the characters were a bit older before all the romancing started. The MC is really good like he is a good person but is influenced by his upbringing regardless. It's not exactly explained why he decided his parents were wrong just like 'the incident happened' or something idk I wish that was better explained. Good story so far hope it continues after Hogwarts unlike many other FF's.

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I don't really understand why they are all falling in love with him. The way it is written is confusing. It seems like his scent is seducing them?? It feels a bit unnatural. Also on the poll on like chapter 103 or something it asks on adding Nyx to the harem but like isn't she a familiar? That's weird to me.

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