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Overprotective parents.
MC as a 7 year old noble child and heir of the house will travel alone to a country that is not only aggressive against his country but also has terrible internal security.
MC: I have little mana but I'm good with a sword.
Training with a knight to have the swordsmanship technique and using up your mana daily for it to grow? No, run into the woods to kill wild animals and learn on your own how to use a sword and be creative with the little mana you have. Train to grow? It is not necessary.
I need to win over these waifus while they're young...
Run to another kingdom...
I need to arrive before the main villain to win over his followers to be my followers.
Why? No, seriously, why?
I have to make Miria mine!
And you're going the right way, being a noble and killing a commoner in a kingdom where nobles kill commoners for no reason and her being a commoner who hates nobles who kill commoners, you'll really gain her trust in no time.
Did I mention he killed someone? Yes, at the age of 6 or 7 he killed an adventurer who threatened him because he was disrespectful towards him. And it all started with the adventurer asking him "Hey kid, are you lost?" or something like this. Since he is a child and was alone in the adventurers' association.
This story started so well, but... haaaa...
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Liked the tale so far but really think that making Kurt travelling so soon when he is like 7 (and without any kind of help, guard or sanctioned companions is not something Kurt's lovely parents would do) is an awful move.
Just doing some worldbuilding of the Earlshide Kingdom and giving us cool slice of life moments would be amazing, play into the aspect of Kurt being a particular precocious/lusty kiddo and write fun scenes and bonding with Sicily and Maria.
You are not required to stick with little Kurt for so long, timeskips exist for a reason, perphaps that's your plan that after the Demon hunter stuff we go straight to canon but well there are lots of limits with kid Kurt for the storyline.
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A great fanfic!
Rating: 5; chapter 20.
I hope it isn't abandoned by the author, there are very few Kenja no Mago fanfics.
I believe that the only points that could be improved (From my point of view as a reader) would be that the MC's personality is very 'childish' despite having a very appealing power, if the author manages to make the story a little more serious perhaps the development Don't end up getting boring, as is the case with very powerful MCs with harems.
Another point to highlight is the MC's romantic interests, I hope the author can pay a lot of attention to the relationship between them, in this aspect I believe that quality surpasses quantity.
I thank the author in advance for the great story, I look forward to the next chapter.
I'm sorry if English is bad, it's not my mother tongue.
A hug for the author!
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4/5 rating; chapter 18
This work is not very realistic, but the good comedy component compensates for the problems with realism.
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