A rough begining as a slave which sadly get resolved too quickly. Reincarnated as a loyal deadly servant not as the villainess. An unlovable mistress who recall her memory of her previous life and gets teriffied of her servant.

Those are all good things. Then for the bad things.

First. The MC is a disgusting pervert in chapter 1 there is a guy lusting after the MC 3 year old body. Later the MC start lusting after her Mistress 9 year old body then start s*xualy harassing her when she hit 10 year old. She is just as bad as the chapter 1 pervert just because she is a girl doesn't make it ok. Frankly a better title would be "Pedophile get reincarnated as a little girl's deadly maid".

Second. Everybody is comicaly evil it's unbelievable. The others maids of the MC's mistress whip her leg just because, she is under no order to do it she just decide to do it. Another maid sell her child to slavery due to gambling debt, later that same child kill her.

Frankly this is not worth your time. I put it at 2 out of 5 because of the good idea I said at the begining but really it's not even worth that.

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Anormalwatcher

Status: c=]

Mar 3, 2023

honestly good fan fic and most of the stuff is understandable. If you read enough honestly keep doing good and maid is probly part succcybus for a reason

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ARKLIGHT

Status: notice: chapter revision

Dec 12, 2024

I see a lot of potential in what this story could be but the grammar and pacing are terrible. As of chapter two the protag is basically Mary Sue because of God's gifts. This wouldn't be so bad but what little attempts at characterization are made are ruined by horrible grammar and hard to follow conversations that have no indicators as to who is talking.

Author if you can please get someone to reread and help edit your story.

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