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50 – DevaSep 24, 2022
49 – Mother-daughter fun time (R18)Sep 24, 2022
48 – End of the warSep 24, 2022
47 – Kizuna vs Echidna part 2Sep 24, 2022
46 – Kizuna vs Echidna part 1Sep 24, 2022
45 – Kizuna and Echidna. Face to faceSep 24, 2022
44 – Battle of dronesSep 24, 2022
43 – The curtain risesSep 24, 2022
42 – Dawn of warSep 24, 2022
41 – Negotiating with a dragonSep 24, 2022
40 – The Breeder Queen (R18)Sep 22, 2022
39 – Unexpected guestsSep 22, 2022
38 – Settling inSep 22, 2022
37 – Melting the ice queen (R18)Sep 21, 2022
36 – Kizuna vs Ingrid part 2Sep 21, 2022

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Zerburos

Status: 25 – cats make great playthings (r18)

Oct 20, 2022

The story was interesting for a moment, the idea was comedic, and had some fan service. Maybe a little too much fan service with flat/2D support chapters that just cross in some bad territory, example: a new crew member gets brain washed/reprogrammed to be a lesbian to only have loyalty and s*xual attraction to the MC... woof...

So I dropped it, and went on my way, only to find that this story had copied, even so slightly, some starting parts of a whole other story called "I Woke up Piloting The Strongest Starship, So I Become A Space Mercenary", it's first chapter! The ship name, ship design/weapon ideas, the fight with some pirates and dialogue, it was so similar that I thought that maybe the fanfic tag should be included!! But it seems more like a copyright issue to me honestly.

Just... disappointing overall.

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StellarWings

Status: c4

Sep 18, 2022

Love the novel so far. Seems that the world was inspired by Phantasy Star and The Legendary Mechanic from what I have read so far. The character design is awesome and their mech suits are reminiscent of Artery Gear / Infinite Stratos.

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Pieter

Status: 50 – deva

Dec 1, 2022

Good story, was trying to find stories like this. Would love to read the part 2 if possible.

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Shade177

Status: 25 – cats make great playthings (r18)

Oct 24, 2022

This story was an decent attempt at writing a space fantasy especially considering that the author has said that they aren't good at writing this genre. The beginning was similar to the beginning of "I Woke up Piloting The Strongest Starship, So I Become A Space Mercenary" though. I thought the casino planet was pretty well done but I had to drop right after because some brain washing came up that seems to be permanent. I just personally didn't like the direction that topic went.

Below is a small list on some things that I think would make the beginning better or more unique.

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Some things that might make the beginning more unique and less similar to the beginning of "I Woke up Piloting The Strongest Starship, So I Become A Space Mercenary" would be:

Changing the ship weapon configuration

Have a military/mercenary patrol find and escort them to the station

Change the name of the mercenary guild

Have the guild test be a supervised pirate hunt or piloting gauntlet (the pirate base and attack could be found this way)

Make the protagonist take out a bigger class of ship during the attack (something that only the military is really equipped to take out)

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