Thus far (Ch3), the story follows exactly what the synopsis explains.

MC is a female goblin (big surprise) and it's a story about her day-to-day. Since goblins grow up very quickly, she's working for her meals the day after her birth. A system exists, and it appears here and there, but is mostly passive/supplementation.

Hints of a bigger story are there, but it's much too early to say anything about it.

5/5 so far, with it having definitely caught my interest. Will be waiting for more antics.

Chapter 10 Update: Very very very good story. Plenty of plot points, lots of s*x, character development, and done so in an interesting manner that has me always hoping for more.

Also the author updates with batch chapters so even though you have to wait a little bit you'll get a lot (quantity and quality).

5/5 still, will donate when possible (personal reasons prevent me)

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I thought the story was entertaining up till chapter 13. In the beginning the story had a unique twist and the pacing was okay, (it was also a lot of polygamy so if your not into someone having 3 boyfriends other than their main, then this is not for you. Well I don’t like it either but it was tolerable.) but in chapter 13 it got plain uncomfortable, the mc’s daughter getting blackmailed and having s*x with someone else than their boyfriend without his consent and then apparently liking it just cuz it was an orc with a larger d*ck?. That chapter got me rating this story a 1 star. I can’t say much for after that chapter but if it continues the way it did, then the author was just writing edgy stuff from every forbidden s*x genre to test it in a story.

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Overall its pretty good but a lot of the story is just the author being edgy for the sake of being edgy 

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Suprisingly good. The author actually wants to do something with his characters. It's a bit 1d at the start but the author begins the properly flesh out the character's beyond "I want s*x". 

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Very few stories make me actively want to support an author. This one is it. I genuinely hope LucyLynn makes a comeback because my wallet is open and waiting.

By gods, but the story telling is spectacular, and the smut factor is 10/10. It's about a horny female goblin who spreads her legs for everyone and anyone. How could you beat that?

The best part is that the s*x scenes never get boring! This is what differentiates greatness from mediocrity when it comes to erotica. 

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An astounding 1st draft! This story and author have great potential!

I Would live to see the author polish this work a little more and re-publish it someday.

Currently it could do with more descriptions and details of events, the story seems to glaze over vast periods of time after the initial few chapters and even jumps years at a time.

Otherwise, this is one of the best stories I've read so far, perhaps my second favorite on this site. The author put great thought into the characters and world setting, the plotline is engaging and entertaining. 

The early charapters have a good dose of ecchi for those who enjoy it (I Do!) sadly this quality of detail slowly tapers away near the latter chapters, and becomes less descriptive, sounding more like a draft or story board than a fleshed out literary work; but the early chapters do prove the author's potential and great peomise. I would reccomend expanding the later chapters to include more details.

, more time needed to be given to all these bits of the story, it seemed as if the author rushed through the tale to write down all the wonderful plotline ideas but neglected to flesh out all the scenes, the story sounds more like a summary of the original story at points.

I have Loved reading this tale so far and HIGHLY reccomend it to others!!! It is a must read and extremely refreshing.

I eagerly await to read more and hope to read the author's final version of this work.

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