Okay, what in the world did I just read?

I'm going to leave this here, not because I've read the story and found myself disliking it. Rather, this is basically just my recommendation to the author to PLEASE write a better synopsis that might actually make someone outside of a very specific brand of degenerate political extremists want to read your work. As this synopsis currently stands, it basically functions as reader-repellent. Some general tips:

1. If you're trying to write a story with an unlikable protagonist then that's fine. If the synopsis is meant to be from said unlikable protagonist's POV then sure, that's not a terrible idea. It's been done before, and done well. Although, if you're going to do that then it's generally a good idea to keep your synopsis relatively brief. Otherwise it gives the impression that the entire book is going to be like that, and trust me, an entire book told in the first person by an unlikable protagonist gets tiring extremely fast.
2. You can have whatever political beliefs you want (like my Dad used to say, opinions are like a**holes. Everyone has one) and there's nothing wrong with writing a story with those politics in mind. However, nobody enjoys being lectured. When you start to come off as preachy (like for example, saying "Only, our dumb Human brains decided not to make the Anthros equal.") people start to tune out. Why would anyone want to read something that tries to tell them what to think? A good way to avoid this is to look at whatever you just wrote that you think is such a great way of bringing attention to an issue you consider important, and write an alternate version endorsing the opposing view just as strongly. If it now feels extremely unappealing to read then that should tell you everything you need to know.
3. Everyone has kinks, and there's nothing wrong with that. There are tons of fics on this site that are basically just thinly-disguised (or completely undisguised) indulgence into the author's fetish. That being said (and I'm just being honest here. No hate) some kinks are best advertised right from the get-go as a courtesy. Something like furry p*rn isn't going to appeal to anyone who isn't into furry porn, so you might as well open with "Hey guys, this is going to be 100% unapologetic furry porn. If you're into that then read on, if you're not then please don't hate and just move on." Putting your disclaimer above the synopsis is better than below, and below is better than not at all.

Alright, I think that should do. You don't have to read this if you don't want to, but I'm giving this advice in good faith. Good luck and I hope your story does well!

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Another piece of Western propaganda that tries to spread out of Twitter and disguise itself as a story (and failed miserably).

I DO NOT MIND tolerating other peoples belief, but that changes once the twat tries to infect other peoples with their brain rot ideology.

Seriously, keep your mindset to yourself, it's disgraceful as a creature that stood above the food chain.

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A story embodying political correctness, trying to bring to life the ultra-Manichean, simplistic and bigoted vision of fashionable militant movements. On the one hand, we have the friendly space pirates rebelling against society, composed of the transgender heroine and poor little discriminated non-humans serving as reflections for all minorities, on the other the cartoonish evil Christian fundamentalists of the future already seen in 345, 784 other science fiction stories. And of course nothing in between, because as the summary says, humans are incapable of tolerance because their brains are too small for it (replace "human" with "heteros*xual privileged white male" if you didn't understand the metaphor not at all subtle).

I wanted to give this story a chance, but I stopped at chapter 9, when there was a whole drama because the heroine talked about bat meat in front of a bat anthro, which gave lead to several paragraphs of autophlagelation on the theme of microaggressions.

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Yeah I'm all for p*rn smut or erotica 

Hell with plot it's fun and more enjoyable than without sometimes

But this is just too much 

It's absurd it's like looking at all the weirdest parts of the furry and other fandoms condensed into a story while at the same time trying to dress up in a actual story suit 

Like a roleplay on a chat site at this point 

My mains peeves and I only read like 3 chapters is 

Captain uwu really I can't stop laughing to actually read my stomach hurts 

If it's satire amazing job I love it if not please give him a name not a meme

s*x scene meh not the worst not the best for someone starting out ima give it a solid 7 

Also politically from the synopsis alone it's basically going like omg people are bad look how stupid their decisions are 

Which ya know valid slavery is wrong but the way you say it is just 

Internet meme woke style writ wrong 

Honestly this story is basically good ideas taken and then written through a very weird style you usually see memes of from people looking in to the weirder sides of the furry communities

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