I will be frank this is pretty bad it's not the worse but there are too many plot holes or conveniences that make it a bit too much annoying for me to read.

Let's start with something simple : the synopsis. It is inaccurate, it is not Mineta Minoru but someone who become Mineta Minoru who gain a dating system.

Second : Mineta's unfortunate appearance get "solved" very quickly when for the sake of the story it would be better for him to stay similar to the original since that is probably what attracted readers to begin with. That Mineta ? With a dating system ? Sign me in. Instead what we get seems to be a wish-fullfilment story with a Gary Stu protagonist.

The protagonist also has a rather "trashy" mindset ? What can be used should be used even people's feelings. It also feels like he would do anything for his desire if he can get away from it.

Here are some others complains which are slighty spoilery

The only positive I could say is that it is not too badly written. In the sense of the story flow and grammar etc.. not in the content.

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the story is a little slow, but I like that he improves the relationship with Ibara little by little, unlike many stories that the harem is formed super fast and they start having s*x in a short time too.

I like the quirk now. Useful.

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I’ll be honest, never read an akikan because of the reputation he has or whatnot you know. But I’m glad I read this anyways (mainly because I’m going through a reading dry spell). This is a banger. A really simple but useful system, with an MC with a good head atop his shoulders. 

1 thing I hope is that the author doesn’t throw out some ‘harem lord’ title. I love how a harem is formed rather than what goes on within a harem because the second is overused these days. Hope you deliver we’ll author. And it’s been a great read so far! You have my support. 

(Anyone wanting to read fanfic with interesting  complicated harem formation with politics and live in the mix, check out HP: International Triwizard Tournament.)

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Good story but have some plot holes. 

H scenes and harem are good.

MC system make him become handsome and tall which is good as who wants to read about ugly Mineta.

Fishing nonsense only a few paragraphs.

Cons:

H scenes usually a few sentences and skip to next day.

MC get alot of useless skills which will never be mentioned again. 

Good skills MC also dont use as MC pretends to only have 1 quirk, author probably also forgotten the rest of the skills.

Introduce some weird skills like squeeze, drink, coffee, alcohol.

Dont know why MC dont kill / plunder All For One. MC so powerful still pretend to be hero / villain.

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Story start out Great, It got a very nice romance start, but it kind of drag out a bit with the MC acceptance of getting a harem. Which, as the reader, we know it gonna be a harem, so having it drag out a bit is fine, but it drag for quite a long bit. However, it transfer into a harem without much problem. But the MC seal his emotion, and lie to the girl for the sake of power, it kind of a unique way of writing a harem, but it turn off a lot of reader. But the ending smoothly solve that issue.

The in between, The harem encounter are mostly nice, and done slowly to develop character interaction, but as more girl are added, there are less written about it, and more focus on the MHA original storyline, so most of the good interaction was before the start of the main story. I do like that the author make it a slow development, but some encounter with the girl are copy paste of each other, so I feel that author could have bind less harem member, and develop each of them more instead. 

One thing I don't like is the Netori part, which the MC got a tendency to do, while he only netori one of the character, there are too many sign of him wanting to do more. 

Another point is, the story focus too much on the make s*x the main point of their relationship, though not as much as other harem story, but it lack normal interaction after MC start to have s*x. Half of the girl fallen because MC let them find out about him doing it with one of the girl. 

Honestly, I wish there is more slice of life moment between the MC and the girls, which become less and less as the story progress.

The ending feel like a fan-fic version of code geass of their ending. It good, and give a decent conclusion. But I feel that the author skip a lot of idea he want to put in. Maybe because it doesn't get much support, but overall, it a nice harem story with some minor flaw that can be overlook.

(kind of wish all the girl name are mention, but they all just get a brief over)

The power gain from the system are quite random, and most of them doesn't get much use. The MC life as original Mineta change quickly, and turn into someone else quite fast.

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Pretty much just a self-insert. "Mineta" may as well be any other guy, he gets an overly convenient system, and the issue of his looks is resolved immediately. Also this hasn't been tagged properly at all, this should at the very least have the Harem genre listed, and despite not going into too much detail it does also contain s*xual content so a warning should've been placed regarding that. As I understand it the story gets less overt after chapter 140 or so, but the 90 chapters between are (this is speculation) likely a sludgefest of MC bags some random girl -> gets power that does nothing or conveniently helps him with an issue -> MC bags some random girl -> repeat. Also I really hate how Mineta's quirk got completely butchered, at some point it's not pop-off and becomes the ability to freely control a nondescript goo. There tends to be a lack of description in places where it matters (I have no clue what Mineta is supposed to look like) and some abilities become conveniently strong. "Mineta" chooses to look like Hisoka for his hero costume, which is also not explained. Does he even know who Hisoka is? Is it just a coincidence he modeled his costume after him? I have no clue because it isn't explained. Also author decided to go ahead and make the story feel like a bad Machine Translation by calling U.A -> Yuuei.

Sorry if I rambled, but I spent 3 hours reading this just to realize the author failed to put harem as a genre.

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" Wealth, fame, power. Gold Roger, the King of the Pirates, attained everything this world has to offer."

"Let's just automatically give all of that to my protag before the story even really starts, " said the author.

It's okay.  There's a reason these types of stories garner so many readers. People like them.  Just don't expect an actual story with character development like in the actual show.  It's pure system gives the generic nameless MC possessing Mineta everything he wants and needs, and everybody falls in love with him except for the punching bags who get punched.

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In the beginning I was annoyed with the protagnist, but as the story kept progresing I started to like the story, so if you would give the story a chance I would recommend it to you.

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