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I’m The Pitiful Villain (Editing)
I’m The Pitiful Villain (Editing)
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[Cover is not mine and it's temporary. If the owner doesn't want me to use this as a cover I can remove it anytime; just say it to me <3]

A man was dying inside a crashed car.

His blood dripped out of his forehead.

Soon, a comforting doom followed while his vision got darker.

Only to hear a knock after.

He thought he was dead, however, when he tried moving and opening his eyes again, he found himself in the body of a VILLAIN named [Alfonso Quiñones]

Author note:
Okay since the title was misleading, please don't read this series if you don't like good mc's (because the mc here is not a villain) He is more in the middle. So... If you guys think you can see a villain mc here that slaughters everyone without care then you will not like this story

Ps: I'm not a native English speaker so if there are any grammatical issues please do point out

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ActionAdultAdventureFantasyHaremMatureRomanceTragedy
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Anti-social Protagonist Arrogant Characters Beautiful Female Lead Broken Engagement Calm Protagonist Cold Protagonist Confident Protagonist Curses Flashbacks Handsome Male Lead Hated Protagonist Incest Love Interest Falls in Love First Male Protagonist Misunderstandings Multiple POV Narcissistic Protagonist Weak to Strong Wealthy Characters Yandere
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    EndOfTheGlory
    Status: chapter 17.2

    Disappointing, that's all I can say about the novel.

    If you expected anything beyond the usual tropes, I'd have to disappoint you. If you've seen one villain novel, you've seen them all it seems.

    I don't understand the high reviews for the novel: it's nothing new, the characters are not properly fleshed out, although not entirely meat bags, and the cliche routes it goes honestly seem annoying because I've seen them countless times already. You can read one Korean villain novel and guess everything immediately.

    Description are scarce, author makes many mistakes in point of views, constantly breaking immersion, sometimes it seems what I read isn't even english at all: I have to wreck my brain to understand overly complicated construction or construction that makes no sense. Commas? Well, you will have to autocorrect author in your head and it's as annoying as these complicated construction are.

    Honestly, is it so hard to download grammar app on browser and autocorrect on the way? Why should I brace myself through the book? And for what exactly? Characters and their interactions are not exactly interesting to catch my interest. Description are as few as they are at Korean novels: that means, that are almost none of them. And I wont trust author with creating interesting descriptions when he can't even write action normally. Worldbuilding? I don't even know where exactly he lives, what surrounds him and what's happening in the world. AT. ALL.

    I know this criticism may seem heavy, but I should just warn future readers about possible complications they may face.

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    WhisperOfDevil
    Status: chapter 10: suspicious

    Mc: I liked the MC. He doesn't forget his own principles, no matter how much the soul of the real 'villain' tries to affect him. I also liked how in just 11 chapters, he has already taken few noteworthy decisions. (I'm not telling what those decisions are because I don't want to spoil.)

    Misunderstandings: Usually, I hate misunderstandings, but since they are in MC's favor right now, they're bearable. But it would have been better if MC would have created these misunderstandings himself knowingly, or if they would have been just one of his plans.

    Pacing: If it would have been the first novel for me of this genre, then I would have found it a little too fast paced for my liking. But as someone who has already read few 'reincarnated into game world' genre, I believed the pacing was perfect.

    Though only 11 chapters have been updated, I still recommend you to go ahead and read it. It's fun. 😉😉

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    SaucyHug
    Status: chapter 23.3: alice

    I love villain novels and I like this one too. If you are looking for something groundbreaking here then you won't be surprised but why would you come on scribblehub to find then next harry potter? Let's lower our expectations a bit. I have to agree with Whisper's review except I don't really have a complaint. I am getting free entertainment and I am sitting in suspense for future chapters.

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    Yandere_god
    Status: chapter 45: ja-young

    one of the best novels I have ever read, hand down

    though the trope is somewhat generic as in relation to reincarnating into a villain MC then turning a new leaf

    The way in which it is portrayed is better than 99% of the novels out there, maybe 2 or 3 could compete, and all of them are written by professional authors, so that's that

    though I can agree with guy down below that world-building is lacking in somewhat of a sense, seeing the authors progress over the past half a year, I can put my hopes on him to improve it.

    the characters are developed and described in appropriate proportions and though some could defiantly be improved, I would give the author a chance for himself to see how to improve on that.

    overall, great novel to binge-read and chill with

    P.S:- the author inserts these great pics and animations of the system prompts and they are AMAZING--

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