Waking up in a new body with two sets of memories, one of the current body and one from a man who died in another world. The memories from his past life give him some knowledge about his current world and predicament. I work and go to college, updates will not be as frequent as you may like. I will try to upload once a week at least. This is my second novel, so hopefully my writing skills have increased.
The Love interest is Alice Cullen.
I do not own Twilight or the cover picture.
As someone who is not a twillight fan, I have to say the story has gotten me hooked. The MC shows that he is not perfect and the female lead is a good choice. The writing is good and I like Charlie.
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Neither good nor bad.
The entire story is too fast paced. There's a lot of grammatical errors, and sentence structure is all over place some times.
The dialogue and interactions seem too narrative as if telling the reader rather than the characters interacting and the plot seems to be moving too fast.
With minimal dialogue with the MC the plot events Skyrocket as if its a video game and the MC is just spamming the skip dialogue button.
The romance is... Average Good. Just that. No development progressively or otherwise. The duo are like a constant from the first time they meet till the writing of this review.
The MC is Bella's cousin and the interactions with her, like the entire plot, seem surface level at best like "ah, I just remembered Bella will right now face x y z, ill rush there!"
Lastly, the MC has severe anger issues but the way they are portrayed by the author makes you think he is an emo middle school grader or a cringy teenager which he isn't, neither biologically or mentally.
Still, I like the story but wish for a rewrite that could delve into his werebear transformation instead of the MC just shrugging it off and not caring at all while all he does is think about the fl. He seriously bearly (wink) explores anything about himself. He see more like a werewolf rather than a viking werebear from sweden.
I give it a 2/5 and say it can be a 3 or a 4 with a good and serious rewrite.
Good luck!
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Better than the original twilight. &Nbsp; Really good story. &Nbsp;Just needs let’s say 100 more chapters.
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I like the story. When I saw its only has 86 chapters I thought it would be unsatisfactory but its actually perfect.
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