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Most OP System
Most OP System
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Most OP System

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ActionAdultComedyEcchiFantasyHaremLitRPGMatureSmut
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  1. Chapter 19Jan 28, 2020
  2. Chapter 18Jan 7, 2020
  3. Not a chapterNov 1, 2019
  4. Chapter 62Nov 1, 2019
  5. Chapter 61Oct 30, 2019
  6. Chapter 60Oct 30, 2019
  7. Chapter 59Oct 30, 2019
  8. Chapter 58Oct 30, 2019
  9. Chapter 57Oct 30, 2019
  10. Chapter 56Oct 30, 2019
  11. Chapter 55Oct 30, 2019
  12. Chapter 54Oct 25, 2019
  13. Chapter 53Oct 25, 2019
  14. Chapter 52Oct 25, 2019
  15. Chapter 51Oct 25, 2019
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      TypeFantasyHeart
      Status: c19
      Oct 27, 2019

      Need to improve a lot of things, such as grammar, then grammar and again grammar. Then it would be loopholes. Tons of them

      Also would it kill you to put a synopsis or a summary of what your novel is about?.... We only know that your novel has a system and its op... but tell me, what system is NOT op?

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      Deffjeff87
      Status: c12
      Jan 12, 2020

      This novel has so many problems. The first one is the biggest one and could easily be fixed with editing and re uploading which will also increase the flow of chapters. 

      1. The chapters are short and I mean 200 words short. So if this novel has 69 ch (at time of review) then you actually have like 15 maybe 20 chapters if even that. 

      2. Wtf is with the start OP. I'm ok with a person earning the OP status even getting a gimmie OP status but this doesn't cut it. Might because the plot and world building has much to be desired 

      3. The world building and plot is trash. I don't really know who's who what's what and what's going on other then a person got the truck-kun treatment put into a body and has OP status but what about the PLOT. After maybe 15 (should be 3) I'm lost. 

      I don't understand this author I have read 2 of the 3 novels on this site and they all have 2 of the 3 issues which causes me to drop the novel. 

      Author you really should restart your novels and look at what the reviews and comments have been saying. And if your planning to take this as a profession and not just a hobby please get some classes on how to write a story. Or at the very least get some friends to read your works before you put it online. 

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      delta33
      Status: chapter 3
      Oct 7, 2019

      I have no idea how this will go but so far it is great.

      I am writing the review to acknowledge the tribute to truck-kun and the meta-Isekai awareness that provides for ample consumption to lovers of the isekai genre

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