Been loving the book so far keep up the good work.

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Awesome story and I hope you keep updating.

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Ok, I am not one for fan fiction, but current Official DC reads like Tumbler bad fan fiction... And this feels and reads like the REAL SuperGirl! Read it you will not  be disappointed! 

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I finished reading this and I really have a lot of hope for it. The author started the MC on a path to greatness and I am eager to see where it lead if they can maintain this level of quality writing. This is a story a bit like my own (Raptor and Komand'r) and so far the author turned Kara in a gray MC who isn't swayed by the black and white life of the DC universe.

We will see where Kara is going with her exploitation of her metaknowledge, so far she started well.

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just binged through all of this and I can say it's nice. I just wished that Kara would be a little more heavy handed with stances on taking down villains cause for all its seriousness the DCU is surprisingly silly sometimes. But I also agree that writing a serious and not 'comic book goodie two shoes hero' without making her seem like a f**king pshyco or some edgy lord is hard.

Anyways this fic is good and its worth a read, but if you are coming here hoping to find some super dark MC..... this ain't it chief but I think its better this way.

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It's very well written and has very little in the way of mistakes. I like the direction the author is taking the MC and I have become very engrossed in the story. Keep up the good work.

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This story is great and the writing is easy to to understand. ][/the story uses more than just the young justice plot line and uses other characters of the dc universe which I like. Spoiler]

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I love the story so far. Author is updating quickly, and I love it. Take your time.

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really well written and I always wanted a supergirl MC. Ill updated when its done

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I will admit, I wasn't sure about this story at first.  I even almost stopped reading it a few times.

It's dark.  It's gritty.  And it's definitely not a "I was reincarnated into a Kryptonian and now I have super powers! Woo-hoo!" kind of story.

The Young Justice animated show is a great story.  And it seems more "real" than the Justice League cartoons of the same time period.  YJ is a step further towards real people with real feelings and their actions have real consequences that ripple out into the real world.

This Supergirl story seems to take things a step further than Young Justice does, at least in the sense of actions having consequences.

It's still early days in the story as Kara is just now starting to interact with members of the League here and there.  Yet, she is making changes to the YJ storyline.  A bit here and a bit there but nothing too outlandish at this time.

At the same time, it seems that Kara just can't catch her breath.  She is still in a "let me get my feet wet before I jump in" kind of mentality, but life happens to her.  Events take place that she just can't ignore and walk away from.  She feels compelled to step in and help.  And that is a major point in her favor.

The story is definitely darker than the Justice League or Young Justice though.  It's not dark enough to turn me away, but it deals realistically with issues of a number of "what if?" scenarios.  What if you start off with a Kryptonian's body?  But then you become captured and experimented on?  What would really happen in that situation?  How would the person deal with it?  How would that experience change them?

Then think of the people behind the masks she meets when she reaches Earth.  How would they react to her?  What would they think of her actions as she tries to save victims but not worry too much about the safety of the villains?  Of a person with super powers who is willing to take that extra "darker" step to protect those in need?

Kara does not have a "I don't give a crap about the lives of the villains" mentality.  She does realize that sometimes you can't save everyone.  And sometimes it's not worth it to try to go all out and capture a villain and it is best just to kill them instead.  Her experiences make her less idealistic and more practical.

That is the mentality this Kara has as someone who has come from our Earth, but ends up in the body of a Kryptonian who has been experimented on and deformed.  It gives her more compassion for others who have been in that situation and less of a need to hold back against those who harm others.

I am interested in how this story will progress.  I loved the Justice League and Young Justice series.  I love Supergirl as a character.  I want to see her story evolve and the path she will be taking as she heals her body, her mental trauma and tries to find her place in the world around her.

A world filled with danger.  A world filled with villains.  And a world filled with heroes.

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