Yo author @Nneeil, the story is good an all but you know I don't really much care about the s*x life of the MC, though since this IS A FANFICTION the story should change more of not the story only focusing in the house but also outside.

You need world-building, expand the place and setting of the story though its already good enough but has more potential.

Your writing grammar construction of character interactions are smooth as an airport, all the best.

Finally... I don't know if you'd consider gradually changing the MCs outlook from personal to social life and social status. Even add some... Martial Art scenes... just joking! Though if you do its gonna blow some minds in a good or bad way.

In summary awesome story but a lot of untapped possible potential elements and plots to add.

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Damn chapter 11 is awesome 👍, come on author! Show us some moves for our Homies~

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Luckily I stumbled upon this story and the only regret I have is the number of chapters, I want more!

By the fourth or fifth chapter of this story, I became interested enough to search for the manhwa it is based on. I wanted to know the current characters in their original setting and get to know the future characters that might appear in this fanfiction, aaand boy was I surprised and disappointed at the same time.

This story by "Nneeil" has a good balance between nicely written "plot" and a potential interesting plot. The strongest point for me so far in this story are its characters, the ones that were introduced so far seem like real people (as much as they can be in a fictional story), they are gradually fleshed out and there is potential for more development for them, after all, we are only at the beginning of the story. Their interactions seem genuine and not forced, everyone has their own voice and you can distinguish them, I even was able to remember their names, when in other stories that are based on Chinese or Korean settings its difficult to do so, it goes to show that they have a "soul" and how good of a job the author did. 

What brings the most joy from reading this story, is its reincarnated protagonist and after comparing him with the original one from the manhwa... I guess it's not fair comparing an infantile 20 years old man-child, with a man that was able to get at the peak of the most popular sport in the world and one that has common sense at that.

I know stories should have some fantastical element that makes us forget about reality, yet everything has a limit and I feel like common sense in this fictional world is truly a superpower, one that luckily our protagonist has and even better is that his presence (more like the author writing skill) makes others characters around him seem real and not caricatures made only for smut.

It's too early to talk about some plot in this story, but there are already some seeds planted that nudges my curiosity and I can't wait to read about it.

It's not fair comparing this fanfiction with the original Manhwa, the comparison is not even close, at least when it comes to story telling, plot and the writing of its characters. The only thing that was forcing myself to go through some stupid cringe when reading the original manhwa, was this fanfiction, so that I would see how the characters are portrayed in its original setting and I could not get myself past 30 chapters, this fanfiction ruined the original for me, not that I would read the original if this story would not exist, I'm glad to stop at 30 chapters of the original, so that I would discover this world and its characters through this story.I wont talk sh*t about the original anymore, it is a good thing that it exists because now this fanfiction exists too. 

I hope there will be more chapters in the future, I see that the updates are rare and I hope the author won't drop this story. It is a good start for what seems like a nice, interesting story in a Korean manhwa setting where the protagonist is a decent human being that has an OP superpower-common sense. 

Thank you for sharing your work and good luck to everyone that reads this story!    

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... just read the damn story, this sh*t is f**king awesome. Not only does our protag already showing signs of char-dev, but the relationships between the family are astounding, and by god, does this author, know how to paint a picture... ah tsubarashi, and as a side note... this chapter solely based on personal preferences... was extraordinary, I... I must say, this infringes upon the work of gods, weaving the fabric of reality right before our eyes... please I humbly implore you, let yourself indulge in these, forbidden desires, frolicking through our authors astounding work, be graced with taboo, passion... and a little bit of futball, with descriptions one can only describe as truly, phenomenal.

"May ye rest, for the weary will find strength in the works of god."—😈

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This is genuinely a superb fic, at the time of this review, the current overall rating is 4.9 with 32 votes and that isn't overselling it in the least.

The characterisation is excellent, the dialogue feels natural, the smut is steamy, the plot is well-paced, the smut-to-plot ratio is bang-on, and the grammar and spelling are perfect. I really can't praise this enough. It completely eclipses the original prnhwa it's based on, and you don't need to be familiar with 'Secret class' to enjoy it.

Read it, you won't regret it.

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I'm really enjoying the plot it's amazing I really liked the story, the protagonist's personality and his interactions with two other characters are very good, these heroines are amazing I'm really enjoying the development of their personality it's much better than the manhwa here is having history not only s*x, I highly recommend it's amazing 

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I just search for copper but found a solid gold. This is the best fanfiction I have ever read. Keep up author!

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