Honestly I was not expecting much I expected horrible grammar and bland dialogue. I was pleasantly surprised when I found out that this had great grammar and nice smut. It shows the realistic parts people do not usually touch on when writing about rsm. The only concern I have is the authors previous works are short hopefully he keeps on writing this.

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Great story. The grammar is really good and the story has a surprising amount of details. The reverse plot is also really well thought out, the only problem I see in it so far is that Gray comes across more as the ‘raging slut that everyone uses as a bicycle’ than the ‘femme fatale’ he said he’s going for. Usually characters like that are more subtle and make the other person ‘work for it’ instead of just offering their ass on a silver platter. 

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