This is a tale about a male MC that grew up on an agricultural world but was forced into life in a middling space navy. He has some character flaws. His is a savant, has OCD but also has low emotional intelligence. The story is developing and he is slowly doing some self reflection to examine his emotional short comings. This story is written a little differently...it has no dialogue. It is first person mostly and dabbles in other characters POV to add to the story.
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While this story has a whole lot of problems, the important fact is that the story is interesting.
Grammar and spelling errors are fairly common. There are a lot of little attention to detail misses. Jan doe vs Jane doe for example. I think there are a few plot holes and the transitions can be very jarring. There is a whole lot of passive voice and info dump type chapters. Way too many characters get thrown at the reader at once in certain parts.
But like I said it is interesting. I can't help but root for the scrappy engineer who is in way over his head for the entire fiction. I've made it to the latest chapter so that should be worth 4 stars IMO.
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a character background we least expect to be a captain of a ship yet soon might be an admiral of a fleet for his happiness & wealth against the darkness the seek to plague him in his life journey.
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