Ganryujima (discontinued)
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4.0 (6 ratings)
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| Total Views (All): | 2,043 |
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| Total Views (Chapters): | 1,036 |
| Average Views: | 41 |
| Word Count: | 6,211 |
| Average Words: | 248 |
| Pages: | 23 |
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| 25 / 25 | Jul 17, 2021 | |
| 1 / 25 | Feb 15, 2021 | |
| 1 / 25 | Jul 13, 2020 | |
| 25 / 25 | Dec 13, 2019 | |
| 25 / 25 | Oct 27, 2019 | |
| 24 / 25 | Oct 15, 2019 | |
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| 1 / 25 | Oct 14, 2019 | |
| 9 / 25 | Oct 13, 2019 | |
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| 1 / 25 | Oct 12, 2019 | |
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- DiscontinuedOct 26, 2019
- 20-Earth (13 years old)Oct 14, 2019
- 19-Earth (13 years old)Oct 13, 2019
- 18-Earth (13 years old)Oct 13, 2019
- 17-Earth (13 years old)Oct 13, 2019
- A Ominous signOct 13, 2019
- 16-Earth (13 years old)Oct 13, 2019
- 15-Earth (12 years old)Oct 13, 2019
- 14-Earth (12 years old)Oct 13, 2019
- AlastorOct 13, 2019
- 13-Growth (12 years old)Oct 13, 2019
- 12-Growth ( 12 years old)Oct 13, 2019
- 11-Growth(12 years old)Oct 13, 2019
- 10-Growth (11 years old )Oct 12, 2019
- 9-Growth (11 years old)Oct 12, 2019
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Little Rant: The chapters are way too short, as in, you barely even need to scroll. The story is very fast, it feels more like a (bad) poetic report than a story; there is no description of the surroundings, only statements such as we made camp here. Why in the hell is one person hating the protagonist enough to make everybody hate him? Why does his mother also seem so cold? So much for motherly love.
TL:DR: Not enough, if any, descriptions, and diabolically short. Talking is also very... unnatural.
Didn't want one of my first reviews to be so negative and look like a hate-post, but... if this doesn't change, I'm afraid I won't be able to get past the 7th 8th 'chapter'
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