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Tamahagane Heart
Tamahagane Heart
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Musashi Misao is the quiet, strong type who shows dominance to everyone but his sister, brother and to the one he loves. Being in the Yakuza requires him to have these qualities. But will a series of events change his occupation or will it end his life.

Yamaji Kinnojo is the most adorable, smart and straightforward person Misao has ever met. It's too bad that Kinnojo hasn't officially met him. Can Misao continue to love him from afar or will the series of events cause him to reveal himself to the younger boy.

Enter the bloodstained world of the Yakuza and watch as love blossoms from endless drops of blood.

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      Loni4ever
      Status: epilogue
      May 4, 2020

      Hmm what to say... *isn't sure what to rate* I usually write reviews for stories that I know I like quite a bit. This one wasn't exactly my cup of tea (although I did enjoy it - some parts more, some less) but since it may be interesting to the author (?) and there's no other reviews yet to give new readers additional info, I decided to write this to express my thoughts on this story :D

      All in all, it can be said to be a nice story. It's cute, has sympathetic characters and a few funny moments. I also personally really liked the lemons XD they were written in a way I hadn't seen previously... not sure what exactly it is but it gave off a very nice vibe. Gosh look at me, focusing on the *action* ////// hahaha xDD 

      Just, well... in a way, the detailing of the characters and plot fell a bit flat for me. They were present and gave distinct impressions, just on a somewhat shallow level imo. It may be that this can't be helped since it's a rather short story but I still would've liked to see more... stuff that shows traits and behaviours of the characters which would make them feel like living vibrant humans with a multitude of facets to them. I can't completely put my finger on what it is... this might be the point where personal taste comes in and it's just a matter of preferences or so xD there's just one specific thing which I'll put in a spoiler:

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      the synopsis made me go into the story with certain expectations of what it would focus on. Like discovering how Kino is smart and reading about Miso stalking Kino and the reason why he fell for him. We never really get that though, and it starts out with Miso approaching Kino right at the start, which I think is a pity (´▽`) from how Kino was described in the synopsis kinda from Miso's perspective, he seems like a quite unique and also capable character. For me, that didn't really come across that much ^^' especially the "smart" part, I would've liked to see Kino use his apparently outstanding wits to his advantage in a few situations xD maybe I misunderstood sth there, if so then my bad xD

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      The thing is, it didn't make me feel much, simple as that. Once again, that may be a matter of preference. Or it may not, who knows xD there were a few times where characters' actions felt a bit random to me. Of course apparent "out of character" behaviour might also be adding to a character's complexity but in this case, I oftentimes couldn't tell the motive or cause for a character's actions or feelings. 

      So yeah, as all things do, this has its charms and flaws. If you're searching for a medium snack of a story that's sweet and imo rather light, this might be a nice pick for you~ 

      (Especially the steamy scenes ⁄ (⁄ ⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄ ⁄) ⁄ I just personally really liked the- ok I'll see myself out now XD)

      Edit: changed a few things for more accurate expression and forgot to add: Firstly, there's occasionally typos, missing punctuation and words, sometimes inconsistent tense. It slightly hinders immersion but doesn't affect one's understanding of the story. Secondly, for those who like or dislike swearing; there's a fair amount of that present. Personally, I enjoyed the characters going off like that hahaha xD

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