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Now this is good. If you like a slow climb to the top, then this is just what you need.
Characters feel great, story is heading in an interesting direction as of chapter 106, I really can't recommend this enough.
+points: 1. No overpowered MC
2. No system
3. And most importantly it is immersive, MC is not a prodigy, he has to grit his teeth to become strong, we can relate to the personality of the MC.
I am not one to give 5stars easily, and this fiction is clearly worth it.
The author has shown his ability to use the original work to his advantage, adapting and filling gaps from the original with few liberties.
His style is deliberate, thoughtful, smooth. He gives us information without redundancy, without infodumps, and let us learn along with the protagonist.
The characters are not fleshed out yet, but depth is well hinted. Our protagonist, Takuma, has a clear immediate goal and very human motivations; there is no ridiculous drama and it is a pleasure to read.
This is a good execution of how Naruto would be like, if it was closer to seinen than shounen. Most fanfic authors get swayed away by the brightness of the show and Naruto's personality that they forget difficulty levels of surviving Naruto world. Especially for someone who is below average in talent.
I am impressed.
This is the best Naruto Fan-fic I have ever come across. The world feels alive, its tough and gritty and reminiscent of the OG naruto. There have so far been no crazy power ups, goldy powers or insane kekai genaki powers thrown at Takuma (mc). Everything is earned by hard work without short cuts.
I look forward to exploring more of the world and hopefully introduction to more side characters.
I want to rate it 3.5 honestly, but I will settle for 4.
This story first arc is just painful for me, like one sided beat down to MC. But it seems the second arc gonna be an up for the MC.
The story is really slow tho for the first arc, dunno about the second one.
Excellent work, a slow story that cares about the details and follows a parallel and original path, something extremely rare in fanfics, I particularly love the small details of the works, I'm fed up with fanfics that only follow the main plot, that's why this work is so incredible, Congratulations on your dedication and I hope it continues for a long time.
Now about the work itself, the beginning is really slow, painful and even torturous in keeping up with the MC's steps, but when his efforts start to pay off, it gets better and better. The grammar is excellent, although English is not my first language.
So that's it if you want an original work in the world of Naruto, with new characters and a plot that doesn't drag on in the canon then give this work a chance.
#no more chunin exams in the forest of death.
This story should have been a solid 5 star with no complaints, BUT I give it a 4 star for the fact his talent during his school exam was faulty as hell. He clearly demonstrated the ability to see through illusions and the instructor just ignores this SUPER AWESOME sensory gem of a ninja and pushed him into the grunt solder corps. So yes super disappointed his talents got flushed down the shatter. Lost interest after that.
It’s really good, but at the same time extremely slow. It’s really gritty and not something that everyone will like.
a good premise, all characters seem to have their own thoughts and needs so no one dimensional characters and a stable world building! People tend to forget that the world that naruto is based on is anything but kind and this novel portray this pretty damn well, easily one the best fan fics i've ever read! But be aware that if naruto is a shounen then this will be a seinen, maybe not for everyone.