This story is supremely stupid.

... let me back up.

The premise of this story is a fairly standard concept - a fantasy world that operates on vaguely videogame-like logic is hardly untread ground, after all, and even if you only include stories with kinky or s*xual elements at the core of the setting or story, that is still quite findable.  So at the core, a story about yet another video game-y fantasy world with s*x as the core should just be a drop in an endless bucket.

Key word: should.

Whereas other stories make the eroticism a key facet outside of combat, and some make it in some way integral to combat (engaging in s*x providing temporary boosts, for example), this story makes the s*x into the combat itself.  While everyone else in her world is playing Final Fantasy, our heroine Ari is busily playing Corruption of Champions.  Furthermore, while many of these stories fall into the trap of having the main character get s*xually and romantically entangled with many characters who all only have eyes for, and relationships with, that main character, Ari's menagerie has already developed interesting and appealing interpersonal dynamics with a small cast.  The story hints that this menagerie is only going to expand from here, but honestly I'd be satisfied seeing this small crew grow and develop as a polycule without more new members needing to be added at all.

So yeah, the story is stupid, but I love it nonetheless.  5/5.

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This story is really well written, even in comparison to non-smut stories (which, from my experience, have a better chance to be good). The characters are likeable and the s*x scenes, while focusing more on the protagonist, also take them into account and work well with the battle-s*x gimmick of the story. I’m really liking it so far and I see a lot of potential.

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TLDR:This really is an excellent piece of literature. There are a dozen things that I have to praise, and really not much that I could come up with that I am dissatisfied with. Definitely worth a read or two or three...

NSFW Stuff: Hot. Scalding. They start fairly vanilla, but quickly expand to more and more diverse things. The MC is constantly finding new kinks, tricks, and methods to extract the highest amount of pleasure in herself and the enemies that she 'fights' against. I also really like that the MC is the one receiving most of the time. That can be hard to come by since a lot of MCs end up throttled into futa-mode. Current kinks include, but are not limited to; So Much Futa, tentacles, handholding, group stuff, voyeurism, mimics?, edging, snuggles, aftercare, d*cksSoBigTheyMakeYouFeelThings, breeding (but no pregante), sharing your feelings like a f**king adult, sharing your actual sensations and feelings like an adult with a lewd potion, Bees?, Does MC even have a cervix or is that just a myth?, emotional support, wakeups*x, emotional support bees, and so very much more. Things that I expect are possible and kind of hope are featured at some point down the road at the rate that the story is going: Inflation, more wolf d*ck, a portal sucking the reader into the MC's harem, and more cute fluffiness.

Concept: The concept is a pretty average litRPG setting with an MC that gets a unique class. Not an isekai, so the MC has decent running knowledge of the world around her. She uses her fantasy s*x powers to s*x up monster girls to gain levels and other bonuses in more and more lewd and steamy ways. She recruits monster girls for her kinky group of misfits. She is on the receiving end a lot, and gets various rewards for her endeavors in a very lewd RPG kinda way. The author tends to pass on detailing most of the loot except for in main encounters or plot items. The stats that are shown quickly lose relevancy in favor of just letting the narrative take control of the stats shown. Generally pretty light on the actual RPG elements, no overabundance of loot. This is not a bad thing. Only showcasing the interesting items, in my opinion, helps keep the story moving without bogging down both the author keeping track as well as us as the readers. Is it hot, s*xy, and/or useful for the given encounter? Probably. Will the MC use is as much as you might expect? Not really. Just go with the flow and do the monster girl s*xing and don't think too much about it.

Story: Honestly? Pretty solid so far. The MC has a decent head on her shoulders (and some extra heads frequently shoved everywhere else) and she is able to make some okay decisions that make sense with the information that she has. I haven't noticed any huge logic gap besides the lack of use of items that could be helpful in favor of just having a good and non-repetitive scene. (I get tired of hearing a character cast fireball in a game, and the MC has to keep things fresh to keep raising the bar on the s*xual escapades as the 'fights' get tougher.) The story still has a lot of places that it can go, and honestly I can only imagine how much further it can go from here. The sky is the limit and the MC is just horny enough to make anything happen.

Characters: Refreshingly, the characters that are focused upon have a really well flushed-out personality for the time that they have been on screen. The dynamics of the group are very, very strange due to the situation that they find themselves in, but their reactions and methods really fit with what they have to work with. Some characters get along better than others, some tolerate each other, and they are all pretty solidly an actual person that I could imagine existing. Well, besides the ridiculous circumstances that would warrant their existence. The harem members also don't immediately love the MC in some undying fantastical way. They warm up to her (and each other) organically and show real consideration for their own feelings and others' feelings. They also don't see everything as sunshine and rainbows, they honestly have their own opinions and desires, hobbies, etc. The MC herself actually spends time reflecting on herself and her actions like a reasonable, but horny, person. I'm excited to see where this will go with more members added in. 

Conclusion: I am overall very happy with this. There is only one complaint I could possibly have. More please? Ah, but I must have patience. The author must go at their own pace. I am excited to see how far down this lewd rabbithole we can fall. Thank you for your hard work Author! 

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a very entertaining story to read, it's a shame it's abandoned

still worth reading

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This story is really good. I like how the way the story is written feels like an adventure story that involves a lot of lewd moments added to the mix. I would consider this story to be a fun story with a good plot that is not too difficult to understand, characters that are fun to follow, fun scenarios besides the adventures that we get and lewd moments that are well integrated into the plot of the story.

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