By Hanne
The thousand-year-old Imperium is crumbling, and war looms on the horizon, bringing with it both brutalities and splendor. Caught in the midst of this chaos is Lansius, an office grunt and veteran MMO player who has been transformed into a medieva
The novel is going well so far. The main character is quite smart. The release schedule is very nice. There are only a few problems I have with this.
1. The author seems to sometimes skip words or mix up the tenses, so minor grammar mistakes are pretty common.
2. Despite the MC being caught up in some conspiracies (and being aware of some of them), he has made no effort to get some sort of advanced weaponry or armor. I mean (spoiler), he's already been caught off guard by a terrorist organization, why wouldn't he get something he can keep in his suit.
3. Perhaps this is just something I personally dislike, but I feel like our MC isn't on screen' enough of the time. It's very often some other pov.
Small note: the king was poisoned, I sort of expected that someone, whether it's the maid or chefs, would have been executed already.
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Honestly, It's pretty good in the 1st chapter.
A flow is a little bit off for me.
But even if I just began reading the 1st chapter.
I still have expectations for the Main character.
I was trying to find a genre like this one.
And honestly, I think I Have found it.
And yes I might just begin reading it.
But I feel a good feeling, Dad this novel might be what I've been looking for.
So hopefully my expectations are not shattered.
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