For the genres this story encompasses, it's a decent read. I'd summarize it as a somewhat typical self-insert in the style of "what if I could fulfill all my dreams without putting in any effort" with some fantasy elements. High school kid becomes an incubus and gains the muscles, girls, friends, and athletic prowess he's never had. He doesn't even have to learn how to get women off since he has magic saliva.

It takes a bit for him to warm up to his powers, so be patient if you find him acting too wimpy. He grows out of it. Don't expect to see MC make the smartest decisions. He often embodies the phrase "young, dumb, and full of cum." At least his transformation cured his dyslexia and he's working on improving.

I also find myself agreeing with Iris in terms of MC's participation in hockey. He's a supernatural creature against humans. It's not even fair. It's like playing a video game with cheat codes on. It might be amusing for a bit, but the lack of challenge makes it boring pretty quick. To be fair it acts as another avenue to attract women, so it's not entirely without merit on the incubus progression side.

The author is slowly adding more fantasy elements in lieu of the mundane high school ones as the story continues, which is a progression I'm enjoying. It's also refreshing that some of the women in the story feel more fleshed out than being cardboard cutouts meant for MC's conquest.

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This is one of my favourite stories at the moment, combing slice-of-life and DnD-esque urban fantasy, with an engaging plot and world-building. Each character is distinct with their own motivations, and the dialogue feels natural. All of the smut is properly integrated into the plot, well-written, and placed appropriately. There are some minor typos here and there but nothing distracting. Update frequency is fantastic, with long chapters at least twice per week.

There are a couple of scenes that made me question the protagonist's intelligence, but he does smarten up as the story progresses, so if you find it bothering you I strongly recommend you stick with it. The protagonist is an incubus, but he is more of a 'neutral good' character, so don't expect him to use his powers for non-con/dub-con scenes, or perform any evil deeds. He doesn't start off that smart or particularly strong, but he is slowly but surely developing as he comes to learn about his own powers, as well as the world and beings around him. I'm excited to learn more and see how this develops further.

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This is one of the better stories on here.

The story is as promised. It is predominately a bunch of supernatural s*x scenes with a bevy of interesting women. The author tosses in just enough combat and magical politics to keep you hooked. There is just enough conflict that it doesn't get boring. I like that the author chose not to go evil with the MC as he is more interesting and the story doesn't get gross. The female characters are more developed than you usually see in stories like this. 

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This is one of my favorite stories on SH. I look forward to updates each week.

The s*x is great, the world is great, the harem is great. I like that the MC has morals and is trying hard not to succumb to the monster. I imagine that will be why he'll succeed when other incubi on Earth have not.

I like that his powers are developing slowly and I think we have a long story ahead of us.

I like that many of the encounters are based on the D&D monsters, as that sets some basic parameters/expectations for readers. I still think the story would be slightly better if the 'victim' arousal was based more on technique, so that he had to work at it a little more, but it's very entertaining and a great read either way.

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Very good story with s*x scenes.

Cons:

MC too soft, dont use his powers more for s*x. 

Dont have s*x with some people due to bullsh*t morals.

MC also abit dumb and quite beta.

During s*x keep talking about gathering life energy, very distracting. Could be mentioned at the end instead.

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If you are here for good smut, even decent grammar and spelling, or a likeable protagonist, you will not find it. If you are here for A- tier world building it's a good read for that at least. The protagonist contradicts himself a lot, treats women who are the most loyal to him like objects, and is generally pretty unintelligent. The story also does this thing that I hate it when smut stories do is they try and condense an entire smut scene to a couple sentences. Just skip it and write better quality ones less often if you have to. In my opinion, if you put smut in a story, there is an expectation that every payoff for the content between the smut is a smut scene and it is sorely lacking here in both quality of writing and frequency of occurrences. The smut feels very unloving (not romantic) and transactional.

In a word, I would describe this binge read (3d for almost 500k words) as frustrating. The protagonist doesn't really seem to grow as a person at all when taking into account how large the story is. I think my biggest problem is that women are constantly throwing themselves at him and he constantly declines their advances, despite him needing them to increase his own power, then complains about how much lacking in power he is constantly. If he was actually smart about how he goes about harvesting power from others, such as focusing on higher tier creatures (like Maya) or exploring the transits more for bigger hauls I would be less annoyed.

His harem is too large I feel, and proper time to develop each character in the harem and their relationship with him is too low. He is spread way too thin which also leads to frustration in the smut department where some S tier characters of which there are probably 4 or 5 don't nearly get the development they deserve. For reference, I'm talking about Artica, Jade, Abigail, Bedelia, and Kiri.

I haven't even touched on the stupid moral dilemmas he constantly puts himself in with characters like Paige or Vida to name only a few, but if I did I would be here forever and so, I digress. The reason incest is bad is because of inbreeding but it's literally impossible for him to impregnate anyone at this point in time and later, he can choose (ok, now I digress).

 He's an incubus and yet he acts so helpless all the time it gets frustrating to read. Im also very much not a fan of retconning the size of his cock from 12 to 9 inches specifically because readers complained he was too big. Author needs to stick to their vision.

Overall, I'm looking forward to where this story is headed as I stuck around for the world building in the end as it's actually quite good, but if you're here for a good smut, look elsewhere.

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Words can’t describe how frustrating and disappointing this story is because of so much wasted potential. You get an incredible system (exponential and exciting rather than grindy linear and boring) and high fantasy along with great world building but the plot is so frustratingly inconsistent/illogical and nonsensical and a massively disappointingly MC who is a huge schizophrenic trashy mess that the story continues to get progressively more obnoxious the longer you read it.

Looking at the story tags and description I figured this would be a nice power fantasy heteros*xual harem story. In actuality the story contains themes of sister/brother incest (but not much real incest so what’s the point??) and should be tagged ‘gender bender’, ‘girls love’, and even hints at ‘boys love’ at times so the reader should be aware of this prior to reading the story. It may seem like a harem story at times, but the MC is too indifferent to s*x, too confused about his s*xuality (some transgender plus homos*xual foreshadowing), too emotionally unavailable to experience love and far too passive/submissive/beta bit*h to lead and earn the respect of the women.

The story slowly and progressively moves into s*xual areas not covered by the tags (e.g. gender bender/trans, lesbian/gay and furry) the further you go along, so it’s best to avoid reading this story if you are offended by any of these things. The story doesn’t seem to have a clear target audience and can’t decide what it wants to be (much like the MC) so it dips its toes a little bit into everything and ends up leaving most people unsatisfied and/or pissed off.

The general theme of the story is that MC is a horny 16 year old boy who is changed into a schizophrenic incubus s*x demon contractually bound to gather life essence and get more powerful by having s*x but instead decides to do almost everything he can to avoid having s*x. Of course the plot is contrived to ensure that he succeeds most of the time and his illogical and baffling stupidity ensures he’s stuck in a conflicted vicious cycle of avoiding s*x and slow power growth.

One segment of the vicious cycle has the MC frequently thinking to himself that he is too weak and needs more life essence so he can get more powerful. Since he is an incubus the only realistic way he can do that is by having lots of s*x (preferably with women who have high tier cores), but he continues to try to avoid having s*x and getting more powerful as much as possible. The contrived absurdity the plot/MC goes to prevent him having s*x and getting more powerful is mind boggling and I don’t know why the author chose to write this story and what he was thinking while writing it.

After a while it starts to get surreal and you start to question yourself about ‘the elephant in the room’. How much longer can the author continue this charade? As you near the 100th chapter you realize the story has turned into a joke and you can no longer suspend disbelief or take it seriously. The more you read the stronger the cognitive dissonance becomes and the more you feel like an idiot for continuing to read it.

What am I missing? The most obvious answer is that the author is trolling me and treating me like an idiot. Why else would he devote so much time and energy dreaming up ways for his incubus MC to avoid having s*x? It gets so out of control that in a chapter shortly after he stopped posting here incubus MC buys sybians for women so he can avoid having s*x with them. Speechless. It seems like the author believes a man and woman having s*x together is immoral and should be avoided and it seems like I’m still stuck in circular logic because I ask again why did the author write this story?

The MC has an annoying and toxic personality and is very unlikeable. He doesn’t feel or show love towards others but buys their loyalty with gifts and special powers so he can continue to use them. The schizophrenic MC randomly switches between treating friends and lovers like sh*t/acting like an asshole towards them and being a virtue signaling passive, submissive beta bit*h that bends over for them and showers them with gifts. It seems like the biggest factor in how he acts is whatever will make him look most stupid, keep him the weakest and result in the least amount of pleasurable s*xual intercourse as he constantly seeks to minimize his own strength, self-esteem and pride.

He thinks that if he constantly gives in to people and acts like a little bit*h that people will like and respect him more. Of course, since the story doesn’t make any sense, that usually goes out the window when it comes to getting more powerful and having s*xual intercourse with beautiful and powerful women (in which case he tries to act like an asshole towards them and turn them into an enemy so he can avoid having s*x with them - sometimes he even fails at that and he somehow thrives despite himself due to plot armor/deus ex machina).

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This story is awesome. Often in story the power creep gets a bit out of control. This is a Strong MC who OP comes from his increasing control instead of powerup. The method of advancement is also pretty novel. I like the inferred macro story line as well. I hope to read the rest of it eventually but I assume this author will be onto bigger and better things. 

TLDR; this is more than an incubus story, much more. The characters feel authentic and the story is compelling. It is worth your time.

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Definitely a great story. I cannot begin to explain how nice it is to have a protagonist like this that doesn't just abuse his powers. He really does a lot of thinking, first he asks himself can I do this, then he asks should I do this. It's very well done and he is very logical when he answers the questions. It's a huge breath of fresh air to have a protagonist in this sort of story that doesn't have s*x with every woman he possibly can.

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