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Ultimate Fruit
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"Have you ever thought about what would happen if you are in the manga that you loved? What could you have changed? Or how you would enjoy that world?

Join our MC as he finds himself in a manga world for unknown reasons and join the main character in his quest to find...One Piece!"

From the works of Eiichiro Oda.


Author's note: This story involves a lot of wish fulfillment and yes, it has harem. Still, this is my first story here in Scribblehub. Some may know me better as imaginexbreaker in RoyalRoadl. I used to write World Gate Online and World Gatekeepers along with other stories but I had stopped writing them as I no longer have time after graduation. This fanfic is something I have only been casually writing in my spare time and is quite lax. Chapters would be slow, but if it's popularity is good, I will try to write faster.
*Oh, and you can also read this along with reading the manga. Since I wrote this while reading it haha.
**Cover art is made by me :)

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    Status: c10

    A """"self-insert"""" fanfic about one piece. However, don't be fooled by the summary or synopsis. This Is not a wish-fulfillment. The MC might be over-powered, but he's far from a Mary Sue as it's clear that Lucas has a several character rules he has to follow.

    Da Rules that we know of so far:

    1.  A Flawed OP power of counter fruit: The MC power is the power to counter everything. The MC op power to counter only activates when he is near death. And he can only keep 1 power. He cannot control what he will get or when it will change

      (I personally think the randomness flaw is a perk to the story rather and hope that it continues later when the character master of Haki. Or maybe it turns out mastering any Haki is a deriment to his abilities. After all, what if he gets a poor ability and cannot get or beat up due to his Hali. In others right now he's weak against the random luck of weak villains)

    2. Hated by God: The author actively expresses hate or antagonism toward the MC getting a love interest or stealing the authors "waifuS/idols". Hopefully there will be even more consequences.

      The MC needs to be punished for unprotected hand holding with Nami!!! The nerve!

    3. No good deed or radical change to the story goes unpunished: The MC actions have consequences, which he himself cannot control.

      Lucas in fact basically kills One Piece's version of Hitler.  Hopefully we will see Red Alert style consequences as the author promised.

      It is clear either way, the author will scale up the challenge of new villains and conflicts as a result of each story change.  
    4. Exploitable Weaknesses: He has a weakness of being too nice and endurance. The MC overuses his power several times and has nearly died as a result (which helped him changes his power so yeah)
    5. Humble: The MC is afraid of ruining One Piece to give in to romance: The is too much of a fanboy that he avoids reciprocating. I really hope the author strings us along for 30-40 more chapters. Till we readers are frothing at the mouth and say kiss already!!!!

    Stories Demerits:

    Honestly there are not many flaws with this fan fiction. In fact, I took me a while to even find one thing "wrong" with the story.

    1.  Every female lead loves him. Currently there are only 3 female leads that like him. I am hopeful that this is won't be a trend. In fact, I just bring it up as I think there is growth for the story here as their is untapped potential for when the MC and newest female lead are not in love or nonromantic. And there is a greater ability to grow the current relationships the MC has already formed.

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    Status: chapter 71: new beginning!

    its great it follows the origanil story line but with a twist also its funny to see peoples reaction to lucas actions 

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    Status: chapter 68: fishman island

    Best One Piece fanfic... correction, Best Fanfic Novel I've ever read. This is what I want from fanfic novels.

    Follows the original story without changing it drastically and the added contect pairs well with the story line. It is really hard to keep the feel of the original series in a fanfic but this novel has done a fantastic job with it.

    I've never given 5 stars or 10/10 for anything I've read or watched, until now. This, as a fanfic, is perfect. This is how I would want to write fanfics if I could. This review is obviously based on my personal tastes and is not professionally graded.

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    Status: chapter 6: departing and new crew!

    My opinion is...

    One piece with some spice of romance, harem and not excessive I really like it!!!!!

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    Status: chapter 102: resolve

    Just awesome to read, great storytelling and immersion, really captures the feel of one piece and its characters (I need more!!!)... Cheers! 

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    Status: chapter 124: one piece!!

    All I can say after reading all of that is... wow. It’s completely mind blowing how good this is. The characters seemed alive and the general feel of the story was just like watching the anime all over again. The story was well thought of and the flow was absolutely perfect. Of course the actual plot is REALLY REALLY AMAZING. on the other hand, the harem was also spot on and not forced. THE MC IS SUPER COOL ABOUT IT ALL AND HANDLES HIMSELF WELL. Finally, before I end this review, I hope everyone gives this novel a chance. It will honestly amaze you and make you laugh.

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    Status: chapter 49: impel down

    I've read quite a bit of One Piece fan fictions but this one I am really interested in. I wouldn't say that it's the best but definitely above average. While the MC is incredibly strong, he isn't OP but just enough that he can continue to grow along with the Straw Hat Pirates later in the story. I like that very much. I also enjoy that while the original story does get changed up with the appearance of Lucas, there are cause and effects to it that make it very interesting to see what happens next. Grammar is OK, haven't really seen to many issues there but the writing needs a bit more detail for the readers to visual better especially to those who aren't as knowledgeable to the One Piece world.

    The only downside I've seen is the romance as the females of the story tend to fall in love with him without any rhyme or reason the majority of the time. Feels very forced.

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    Status: chapter 22: promise

    Love it!!

    Keep up the good work!

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    Status: chapter 24: goodbye…

    In my opinion that story is perfect 

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    It's Great, I loved your Plot Twists and the new storyline.

    My expectations are high for this Fan-Fic, it's just as good as the original, you never know what's going to happen next and that's what I love about it. But if you run out of creativity, I will be happy to give my help.

    Thank You for making this Fan-Fic and I hope sincerely hope for you to see this Story to its End.

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