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Ultimate Fruit
Ultimate Fruit
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Lucas

The main character in the novel Ultimate Fruit. Born from our world and somehow transmigrated to the world of One Piece! As he joins the Strawhat crew, he begins to discover a hidden power inside him!

Monkey D. Luffy
The main character of the manga, One Piece! When he was a kid, he had accidentally eaten the Gomu Gomu no Mi (Rubber Fruit) that Shanks had brought with him. Since then, he had gained rubber powers and the ability to stretch his body! He is an optimistic and simple young man with short black hair and a scar under his left eye. His most iconic feature is his straw hat that he always wears with him, leading to being an icon for his pirate group, the Strawhat Pirates!
Roronoa Zoro

Luffy's first mate. A former pirate hunter turned pirate by Luffy in the early chapters of One Piece and a 3-sword style (santoryuu) swordsman who uses 3 katanas that he wears in his belt. He has stoic expression and short green hair which Sanji usually refers him to as 'Mosshead' due to that. His iconic feature is the black headband that he wears when he turns serious but would leave it in his sleeve when not.

Nami

A former thief and member of the Arlong Pirates. Due to Arlong raiding her village when she was a kid, she joined his crew as a cartographer with the promise of buying her village if she gains 20 million Beli. Later on, she met Luffy who was able to beat Arlong and free her whole village which she then joins his crew as a navigator. With her knowledge in weather and navigation, she holds a staff called Clima-tact which had the ability to shoot out bubbles of different temperatures, thereby slightly controlling the weather. She has an orange short hair and a playful yet serious personality. Her iconic feature is the pinwheel and orange tattoo on her left shoulder where her previous Arlong tattoo was placed.

Usopp

A liar and sharpshooter. His father's name is Yasopp, one of the officers in the Red Hair's crew. Due to his childhood, he learned how to lie to make others feel happy. He also tinkers and makes gadgets that he often uses in his lie or in a fight. Nami's Clima-tact is one of his inventions as well and would further upgrade it in the future. His aim is extremely accurate with his weapon being a slingshot where he shoots various different pellets to either confuse or defeat an enemy. His personality is cowardly, yet when needed, he becomes a brave warrior who would do anything to save his friends! He has curly black hair and an especially long nose. His iconic feature is his goggles that he wears on his head that he uses as sort of like a scope.

Vinsmoke Sanji

The chef of the Strawhat crew. Being born in the noble Vinsmoke family, he finds himself different from his brothers and sister so he ran away. Eventually being found by former pirate, Red Leg Zeref, he learns how to cook and learns his kicking style as well. After being convinced by Luffy, he joins his crew in order to fulfill his dream of finding All Blue! His personality is that of a pervert and a gentleman at the same time. When he sees a beautiful woman, he swoons and loses all sense of sanity, even going so far as to nose bleed when the woman is especially beautiful. He has short yellow blonde hair and a curly eyebrow which Zoro often teases him with 'Curlybrows' from time to time. His iconic feature is his cigarette which he could be seen mostly smoking.

Nico Robin

Formerly known as Miss All Sunday as part of Crocodile's Baroque Works. Another name know by the Marines is 'Devil Child' due to her ties with Ohara. She is said to be the only remaining person who can read the Poneglyphs that can lead to the ancient weapons, the true history, or to One Piece itself. She's a curious and frank person who can say deadly things while not changing her expression. Her powers come from the devil fruit called Hana Hana no Mi (Flower Fruit) which allows her to sprout her body parts to anywhere she wanted. She has black hair that falls down to her shoulders. She has no visible iconic feature that she wears on her but she could be seen wearing a pair of sunglasses on her head most of the time.

Franky

A hentai (pervert) cyborg. As an engineer, he had modified his whole body with various weapons and fuel them using cola. He was the one who had made the Strawhat's new pirate ship called Thousand Sunny and equipped it with various functions as well. His personality is that of a pervert as he never wears pants and only wears brief every time. He has blue hair and a pair of star tattoos on his left and right arms. His iconic feature is he wears a pair of black sunglasses on his head.

Brook

A skeleton. He had no shadow when Luffy first found him. After defeating Gecko Moria and reclaiming the shadows he took, Brook joined the Strawhat crew as the musician. He is also proficient in swordsmanship and would carry a sword cane with him at all times. Due to eating the Yomi Yomi no Mi (Revive Fruit), he is unable to die which was why he still lives despite being a skeleton. Because of his lightweight, he can walk across the water despite being supposedly weak to it. He has a big black afro and would often be seen wearing a tophat. His iconic feature is...well, he's a skeleton. But after the 2-year time skip, he would be seen wearing a golden crown and pink heart-shaped glasses on his head.

Nefertari Vivi

A princess of Alabasta. After her father is accused of stealing the rain, she sneaked out and infiltrated Baroque Works to figure out the true mastermind. Later on, she joins Luffy and his crew to take down Crocodile and free her own kingdom! She has a kind and courageous personality even though she is a princess. She has long blue hair and has a pet called Karoo who is basically a big duck she can ride to travel the desert.

Nefertari Cobra

King of Alabasta and the father of Vivi. Among the world alliance, he is one of the just and fair Kings that ruled his kingdom. Despite being a King, he attaches great importance to his subjects and his people. He has long black curly hair and a goatee with three points on his chin.

Crocodile

Former Shichibukai. He dreams of creating a nation of his own and wanted to find Pluto in order to achieve this. Later on, he was stopped by Luffy and his Shichibukai title was revoked by the Marines and is serving his time in the lower levels of Impel Down. His powers came from the devil fruit Suna Suna no Mi (Sand Fruit) which resulted in him being able to transform and control sand. He has short black hair that's neatly combed and a long line of a scar in the middle of his face which was said to be a result of his fight with Whitebeard. He is also seen to be wearing a golden hook on his left hand as well.

Items
One Piece

Said to be the treasure left by the previous Pirate King, Gol D. Roger in the final island of the Grand Line, Raftel! Currently unknown as to what sort of treasure it really is but many pirates dream to one day acquire it and become the new era's Pirate King!

Devil Fruit

A unique fruit that randomly appears in the Grand Line. When eaten, it would give you powers but in turn, make you weak to the sea. Devil fruits are further categorized into three types.

  • Paramecia: The Paramecia Devil Fruit is the most commonly seen type among the three. It grants its users abilities that affect their body, manipulate their surroundings, or produce substances.
  • Logia: Logia Devil Fruit allows users to transform into natural elements or forces of nature. They are often considered the most powerful and rarest of the three types.
  • Zoan: The Zoan Devil Fruit allows its user to transform into another species, at will. It provides the user with three basic forms: Human Form, Human Beast Form, and Beast Form.
Location
Grand Line
An ocean that is divided into two parts by the Red Line. The first half is normally referred to as the Pirate's graveyard by the people of the other 4 Seas but it is more commonly known as Paradise to those pirates who are able to venture in it. This is because compared to the latter half, the New World, the first half is simply Paradise!
Alabasta

The Kingdom of Vivi where her father, Nefertari Cobra, is the current ruler.

Alabasta Map

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    neoshadow
    Status: c10

    A """"self-insert"""" fanfic about one piece. However, don't be fooled by the summary or synopsis. This Is not a wish-fulfillment. The MC might be over-powered, but he's far from a Mary Sue as it's clear that Lucas has a several character rules he has to follow.

    Da Rules that we know of so far:

    1.  A Flawed OP power of counter fruit: The MC power is the power to counter everything. The MC op power to counter only activates when he is near death. And he can only keep 1 power. He cannot control what he will get or when it will change
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      (I personally think the randomness flaw is a perk to the story rather and hope that it continues later when the character master of Haki. Or maybe it turns out mastering any Haki is a deriment to his abilities. After all, what if he gets a poor ability and cannot get or beat up due to his Hali. In others right now he's weak against the random luck of weak villains)

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    2. Hated by God: The author actively expresses hate or antagonism toward the MC getting a love interest or stealing the authors "waifuS/idols". Hopefully there will be even more consequences.
      Spoiler

      The MC needs to be punished for unprotected hand holding with Nami!!! The nerve!

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    3. No good deed or radical change to the story goes unpunished: The MC actions have consequences, which he himself cannot control.
       
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      Lucas in fact basically kills One Piece's version of Hitler.  Hopefully we will see Red Alert style consequences as the author promised.

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      It is clear either way, the author will scale up the challenge of new villains and conflicts as a result of each story change.  
    4. Exploitable Weaknesses: He has a weakness of being too nice and endurance. The MC overuses his power several times and has nearly died as a result (which helped him changes his power so yeah)
    5. Humble: The MC is afraid of ruining One Piece to give in to romance: The is too much of a fanboy that he avoids reciprocating. I really hope the author strings us along for 30-40 more chapters. Till we readers are frothing at the mouth and say kiss already!!!!

    Stories Demerits:

    Honestly there are not many flaws with this fan fiction. In fact, I took me a while to even find one thing "wrong" with the story.

    1.  Every female lead loves him. Currently there are only 3 female leads that like him. I am hopeful that this is won't be a trend. In fact, I just bring it up as I think there is growth for the story here as their is untapped potential for when the MC and newest female lead are not in love or nonromantic. And there is a greater ability to grow the current relationships the MC has already formed.

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    SILVERMAX
    Status: chapter 71: new beginning!

    its great it follows the origanil story line but with a twist also its funny to see peoples reaction to lucas actions 

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    Dravde
    Status: chapter 68: fishman island

    Best One Piece fanfic... correction, Best Fanfic Novel I've ever read. This is what I want from fanfic novels.

    Follows the original story without changing it drastically and the added contect pairs well with the story line. It is really hard to keep the feel of the original series in a fanfic but this novel has done a fantastic job with it.

    I've never given 5 stars or 10/10 for anything I've read or watched, until now. This, as a fanfic, is perfect. This is how I would want to write fanfics if I could. This review is obviously based on my personal tastes and is not professionally graded.

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    Stern
    Status: chapter 6: departing and new crew!

    My opinion is...

    One piece with some spice of romance, harem and not excessive I really like it!!!!!

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    NyanFab
    Status: chapter 102: resolve

    Just awesome to read, great storytelling and immersion, really captures the feel of one piece and its characters (I need more!!!)... Cheers! 

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    Ynoch
    Status: chapter 124: one piece!!

    All I can say after reading all of that is... wow. It’s completely mind blowing how good this is. The characters seemed alive and the general feel of the story was just like watching the anime all over again. The story was well thought of and the flow was absolutely perfect. Of course the actual plot is REALLY REALLY AMAZING. on the other hand, the harem was also spot on and not forced. THE MC IS SUPER COOL ABOUT IT ALL AND HANDLES HIMSELF WELL. Finally, before I end this review, I hope everyone gives this novel a chance. It will honestly amaze you and make you laugh.

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    rodusk123
    Status: chapter 49: impel down

    I've read quite a bit of One Piece fan fictions but this one I am really interested in. I wouldn't say that it's the best but definitely above average. While the MC is incredibly strong, he isn't OP but just enough that he can continue to grow along with the Straw Hat Pirates later in the story. I like that very much. I also enjoy that while the original story does get changed up with the appearance of Lucas, there are cause and effects to it that make it very interesting to see what happens next. Grammar is OK, haven't really seen to many issues there but the writing needs a bit more detail for the readers to visual better especially to those who aren't as knowledgeable to the One Piece world.

    The only downside I've seen is the romance as the females of the story tend to fall in love with him without any rhyme or reason the majority of the time. Feels very forced.

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    Quid_the_leach
    Status: chapter 22: promise

    Love it!!

    Keep up the good work!

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    Tormenta544
    Status: chapter 24: goodbye…

    In my opinion that story is perfect 

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    It's Great, I loved your Plot Twists and the new storyline.

    My expectations are high for this Fan-Fic, it's just as good as the original, you never know what's going to happen next and that's what I love about it. But if you run out of creativity, I will be happy to give my help.

    Thank You for making this Fan-Fic and I hope sincerely hope for you to see this Story to its End.

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