A very good story about a intelligent sword and her wielders, the quality of the story was fantastic, the character development is great, and the world building is so good as well, a very good, descriptive, original, and very qualitic story that I recommend for everyone to read

3 Likes · Like

DaoistFox

Status: nadivir, the crimson snow

Jan 11, 2023

Dropped this novel,

first of all lets not talk about the novel but how its being presented.

And as I said I'm not talking about the story but reading it itself. The author seems to like using boxes for status and notification from the system which I find perfectly normal. But! the problem lies within the fact the author lacks proper understanding of Color theory. Okay I wont blame you for not knowing color theory as not everyone knows much about it, but even people who don't know about it would have better color pallet and combination than the author of this novel. As an art student I never knew such atrocious combination of colors could even exist. I'm literally having a migraine right now just because I read this novel.

Moving on to the story, FIGHTING SCENES ARE AMAZING BUT....

Later chapter or at least where I'm at, the point where I lost patience. There isn't any indication of the sword leveling up and including the fact that the leveling is so, for the lack of better words, inconsistent. one chapter the sword was level 90 and announced to gain 10 level but only to be shown as lvl 89 later chapter, And to make things worst after that chapter it never appears again (leveling system of the sword) at least until where I read and lost patience.

You might say I should be more patient but, ill tell you this, the current wielder killed level 1000 monster yet no indication of the MC leveling up and previously before it she killed a level 500+ and would occasionally kill level 200+. It seems like the author wants to focus on the wielder in the current chapters I'm at, but I believe that he or she should balance it with the OG MC of this series (the sword) and the wielder. Currently all I see is the author slowly turning the current wielder I'm reading (charlotte) as the MC and giving little to no screen time to the sword. (reason why I lost patience) which find ironic since the real MC here is the sword like hello? first few chapters were amazing it hooked me on honestly, but sadly quality degraded.

In conclusion, I believe the author should make a story where the MC is human as he or she is really good at it anyways. This may come out rude to the majority but it is what it is, I've already sugar coated my words its up to you how you take this review in.

Adios

2 Likes · Like