This is everything I could ever want in a pokemon fic!! I love the balance of realism in the fic and the characters are nicely developed and fleshed out. I like the pokemon choice as well and the whole story is just really well-written with good grammar. For people who have read Sacrifice and Subjugation  and I Want to Travel the World  (if you haven't go read those now!), this reminds me of a mix of those but with gay (which makes it 10 times better obviously) !

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Just binged this fic. It has a great balance of action, character, drama, and intrigue. There can be a lot to keep track of, but it's all very good so I don't find myself minding. I worry that there will be a lot of chapters focusing on cast gym battles with the expanding cast and that it might get too long, but I'm still totally in for it. The battles are very well written both trainer battles and wild battles, which is a crucial thing to get right. It's got a little bit of everything!

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Very wholesome so far. No stupidly overpowered characters, the villains are menacing, worldbuilding is good... Overall a great story!

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I wish I could give this a higher rating.

• Good use of Pokemon World? (✓)
• Character Development? (✓)
• Realistic Story? (✓)
• Interesting MC? (✓)
• Use of Real World Knowledge not just "Anime Logic"? (✓)

Honestly one of the best stories I've ever read both fan made and published books, the writer really should do the world a favour and make this their career if they haven't already. I am always checking scribble hub for updates on this story, absolutely amazing work, keep it up!

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Read this fanfiction in 3 days and can't get enough of it and can barely wait for more to come, love everything from the characters and their relationships to the pokemon battles, keep it up 

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the plot and the battles get only better and better the more you read and I love the word build so much because of the changes that the autor make are very interesting and the word fell very alive because of the interludes that show the views of other people about the main cast and the views of the word and the battles descriptions and the Strategies of the trainers feel very clever

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The story is simply fantastic. You will journey across Sinnoh with Grace (our protagonist). In this wonderful story, you will share her joy of first victory, you will share her worries over friendship, you will share her burden of ever increasing responsibilities, and you will struggle and grow with her and her pokemons.

And above all, it makes you want to re-visit your past pokemon games. 

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I love how much fluff there is in the story even though it sometimes takes kind of a dark undertone

Really looking forward to the gl

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If you're asking if the story is good or if the writing, characters, world-building, etcetera etcetera. The yes the story is good from these fronts 

What I want to point out, is what wasn't pointed out for me that is, is that the Grace (the MC) will cheat on her girlfriend, be dumbed by her girlfriend whom she cheated on and getting together with bit*h she cheated on her girlfriend with in the same chapter (330).

I'm so f**king pissed of tight now so I will stop here, I just wanted to warn the future people who *hate* this this kinda of sh*t. 

I wish someone could've warned me tho to outright not read it but alas here I'm. I hope I'm saving?/warning someone with this 

I wish I can make this less the 3 stars, but it won't be fair to the first 270 chapters of FF.

Anyways I warned you. The bit*h cheats and gets with her affair partner in the same f**king day/chapter

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This is one of the best fanfic. Way of writing is very intriguing and MC is very relatable. I have read about 33 chapters and I am going to slow down so that I can enjoy it everyday. 

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