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We are like 10 chapters in and I can already tell this is going to go places. The grammar is good, the plot exists, and the smut is legit well written. Also, best pokemon premise I've seen... ever on any site. 5/5 as of right now.
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This fanfic has a bad writing style. If you are not an expert on the universe, there is simply nothing to do here. But even if you are an expert: the chapters are short, the erotica is bad, and the atmosphere is also crap.
Bottom line: as an independent work - a complete failure. As a fanfic - weak.
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I like the story and characters so far. The one thing that bothers me besides the occasional typo though, is how short and nondescript the smut can be at times. It would also be nice if the humanoid pokémon got a few more lines to describe their appearance.
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