The Mc is gets his memories of a previous Life, Turns out he was in Modern Family or more specifically the twin brother of Hayley.
And that's not the end He gets a System to boot.
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I would also like to thank ChatGPT or OpenAI as that has made the entire writing quality of this novel so much better, Full credits to them for improving the writing quality at around Ch 76
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I finished today with the last chapter, so I thought to give my impression here.
Disclaimer: I have not seen Modern Family or The Addams Family / Wednesday. Take this into account when reading further.
Writing: To be honest, it is bad. I'd say at the level of an edited machine translation. Many words were misspelled, and it is full of run-on sentences. POV swaps are also frequent and almost just repeat the previous scenes. Most of the time, it only adds little with the inner monologues and could have been handled way better by swapping POV fully for the next scene. - It does get better later on, though.
Plot: I cannot say much without putting it all under spoiler tags, and since I don't know the show's original plot, me complaining about stuff may not even be the author's fault. What I can say is that there are quite a few logic errors on how the world or "his powers" (should) work. Things that are happening in the background are also only just being introduced, so I will leave this open for now.
Character: The MC is 15 years old, but also got his memories from his past life, so I would expect him to act more mature. Especially since he received Tony Stark's intellect and knowledge. Sadly, that is not the case, and he acts hasty like the teen he is, and overconfident like someone who just won the lotteries.
Other character besides the MC and FL don't really get much screen time, so character development is almost nonexistent. This is probably the case since the author expects his readers to know the TV series and already have a good image of everyone.
World-building: Almost nonexistent, too. We hardly know anything that is happening in the world besides what the MC is experiencing, with the single exceptions of the main plot points that are introduced. There are no friends for social events that are not plot related or other activities.
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tl;dr: if you have time and want to read something while shutting your brain down, this is for you. Otherwise, you may get bored/frustrated.
All this may be different though, if you are a fan of the TV series this is based on.
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I registered on this site just for this fanfiction. I love this story, waiting for the next chapters is torture, you need more chapters. It seems difficult knowing the character but frankly Wednesday as a unique love interest or his werewolf friend would be fantastic
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My first impression of this novel was quite bad and I feel quite sorry I reviewed it like that for a moment. The characters had no depth in it, and almost everything was a mess, but now that I've read it, I believe the author had gotten better at writing but you still shouldn't read it if you're here to just binge on good novels
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An amazing story with realistic characters that react like normal people would in extraordinary situations. MC does have some character flaws, but that's what makes it interesting. Also, as of the time of this review I vote Wednesday for FL.
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