Alternative title : The 3rd life of an arrogant and spoiled child
In my first life, I died destitute, alone and in a cave
In my second life, I found family love and happiness. Too bad it was a short one. Wait. What! My first life was a book! I was a cannon fodder!
This is my third life, I returned to the past of my original life. I plan to stay far away from that sh*ty protagonist and his harem. Peacefulness and happiness is my only goal and I am ready to do anything to reach it
Author note: Most of the story happens during MC's childhood. Do not expect a quick growth in strength
Additional details about cultivation levels and stages:
Cultivation stages: Qi Condensation → Foundation Establishment → Core Formation → Nascent Soul → Nihility → Ascension → Half Immortal → ...
Each stage has levels, Qi Condensation is from level 1 to 9 and all other stages have low/medium/high levels.
The middle plane where our MC is cannot hold a cultivator at the Ascension stage. Those ascending need to go to a higher plane
The lower plane have few cultivators and it cannot hold the Nascent Soul stage
The novel would be way better if the author fixed a few things.
Especially the writing.
The dialogue is often not separated properly. There are quite a lot of grammar mistakes. The author sometimes even forgot to add ellipses at the end of sentences. Here is an example from the start of chapter 8:
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“What... What are you talking about... ” “we never bully kids from school... ” “you do not have any proof... ” “if you do not want to go out with us just say so” “Don’t slander us!” Everyone answered at the same time.
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The dialogue is a bit unrealistic, and so is the situation. Even if they were part of the plan, I doubt they would have been openly informed about it. Seeing as they're like 10-13 years old, they could expose themselves. Each character's speech should have started with a capital letter, and every sentence should have been written in a new row.
The author often writes things as if he made them up on the spot. He also dumps way too much information onto the readers.
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It's a good, lighthearted story that has the reader see the MC from his unstable and unhappy situation to a much better place with lovely side characters and entertaining (for the most part) villains. If you've the time then I reccomend giving this a try.
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Pretty unique reincarnation novel with a cultivation theme to it. I've only just started but the writing style has me hooked. I like the short chapters with mini cliff hangers, it makes me want to read more and more haha. I have not fully dove deep into the cultivation process just yet, but it seems like there will be a standard school setting. Plus rapid growth of the MC getting stronger with a unique cultivation technique. I'm happy I found this story, very cool world this author is creating:)
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