A boy who was outcasted from society at a young age due to his inability to conform finds solace in reading numerous fantasy stories in place of human interaction. He particularly grows fond of a story named Danamchi, going so far as to read the novels, play the games, and read forums and interviews to enjoy it to the greatest extent.
Eventually, his isolation from society spelled his end. But it was not yet the end of this anti-social loner, as he soon woke up in the body of a character he was all too familiar with.
"I've been reborn as Bell Cranel?!.... AND I ALSO HAVE EMIYA'S PROJECTION MAGECRAFT?!!"
Authors note:
Hello! This will be my first fanfiction on this site. I'm a big fan of both Danmachi and Type moon so I had this idea of a crossover fanfiction for a while.
First off, this story will mostly be the same as the canon of the original danmachi with the inclusion of some fate characters in the world to spice this up.
Secondly, I plan to make this story a harem, though I don't intend to make it so that every girl immediately falls in love with the MC for an arbitrary reason. I'll try my best to flesh out each romantic partner in a way that isn't like a stereotypical anime romance.
Thirdly, The mc isn't going to be some chad thunderc*ck guy. He will have the sensibilities to recognize and acknowledge the horrible stuff in the world, but will not be some innocent snowflake like the original bell nor a murderous maniac pragmatist.
Lastly, though I included the R18 tag, I am still developing my skills to write lemons. So don't expect too much of those. Though I will promise it will happen sometime in the future.
I NEEEEED MOAR
At first I thought this would be just a generic story, with a generic plot, and lot of seggs, considering I was searching to maybe a good smut with plot, or plut with smur either way
But I found a literal gold, treasure, uncovered deep down, 10/10 one of the best Danmachi fict I've ever read
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A pleasant surprise, I went in out of boredom but the story came out much better than I expected definitely better than most Damachi fics in my opinion.
Easy to read and understand with only a handful of typos at times, negligible given the upload rate and overall text and grammar
Characters fleshed out in ways I love, especially those characters that don't get enough highlight in canon (because they're dead or so) and the change in personalily
Due to the story taking place prior to canon
One point I'm not fond on is
the edgy eminence in shadow thing, I mean logical at the start yes, but its going to turn more detrimental soon, especially in regards to his relationships which are already messy... so im hoping he comes out to light not long after the start of canon maybe? lacking falna and the opportunity to research and perhaps improve it (beyond the dungeon's control) is essentially crippling himself, hope he decides on a familia soon
Honestly something like him building up the Astrea Familia again (cause it syncs with his values) would be epic
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I'm gonna sum up the story so far...
It's an SI story as Bell Cranel with EMIYA power. Till chapter 24 the story focuses a lot on SI Bell's character development. The story doesn't follow the original timeline so you can say that it's an AU.
The type-Moon element existence in this fic still has not been explained clearly, in the future the author may or may not rectify this. But, who knows?
The power system in this fic is kinda screwed up I think... The TM power system doesn't translate well into the danmachi power system in general. But, this thing can be easily ignored if you think much about it.
All in all, it's an interesting take on danmachi with a lot of TM shenanigans. The rating might go up or down depending on how well the author justified some of the crossover elements in future chap.
Last thing... IMO,
Adding gun lance from the MH series into this fic is kinda weird and unnecessary, but hey it's just my opinion. You do you authors.
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I read your novel in webnovel
And I was surfing through scribble only to find it here lol
Just gotta say guys try this If you're into Danmachi stuff
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I came to this thinking I would be able to pass some time but instead I just found gold and I am thirsting for more must recommend if your atleast a fan of danmachi
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This is an amazingly fun story to read. If you're looking for something with action driven by characters' goals and dreams, this is definitely the fic for you. The characters, world, emotional drives, (burgeoning) romances, feel real and have weight in the story. Nothing feels unnecessary or forced, moreover boring. I wouldn't call it "perfect" in all aspects but the sum of the story's parts, synergies extremely well for an immersive read. Bravo Mr Author!
The only "knock" I can truly give this fic is the sometimes odd sentences structure (not incorrect, just off) but that's just being pedantic honestly. The author isn't a native English speaker and despite that, it didn't impede my enjoyment at all when reading it to chapter 24. If anything it added a unique style to writing that benefited the narratives. Notably the humor and character interactions being more "alive" imo.
I could go on and on about how this is a good read but I'll just give you my word that you won't regret at giving the story a chance.
Heads Up: There is some crossover elements but they merely exist as additives to the awesome setting being laid out, not obnoxious or intrusive to the Danmachi world at all. Again the synergy of the various elements of the story are done in a satisfying methodology that most amateur authors don't development early on like this one.
Happy Reading!
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If I was going to be more specific, I'd say it's like a 2.75 than a 3, but... yeah. Also all of this is under the assumption that English isn't the author's first language, so if it is, I'd almost want to drop this to a 2 star. I wouldn't, but it'd make me consider it.
Practically all of my complaints stem from the writing, so if you're 'used to it' or whatever, this review might not hold a lot of substance for you. The general story is just as is described on the tin: reincarnated as Bell with EMIYA powers; harem of characters from Danmachi
including goddesses; and FATE characters + aspects to fight against... though that's kind of a given after like 2 chapters considering Medea is his 'sister' (which is probably one of my LEAST favorite 'relationship' developments in this entire story, just due to how utterly wasted her entire character ends up being even up to the most recent chapter [64 at the time of this].)
So, the absolute BIGGEST problem I have with this is just how utterly lazy the writing is. Not in the sense that the story isn't planned out properly or anything—nothing worth complaining about anyway—but in how the sentences are actually structured and strung together. These are all just things I could think of off the top of my head and some surface-level skimming of a chapter to make sure I wasn't talking out my ass.
And I get it; I couldn't write in another language to save my life, so them being willing to make such long chapters is a commendable effort... but they just seem to never improve because literally NO ONE is telling them what's wrong. They got an editor at some point down the line and I don't even know what they did other than run it through Grammarly to make sure nothing was 'misspelled', but even then I don't think that's doing much. Then again, I don't have access to the rough drafts, so who knows.
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Oh boy, is this novel a wild Ride and a fun time!
I really recommend this novel to anyone needing that pick-me-up from reading bashful yet awesome MC's, and other than the level of the lemons requiring a bit of a open Mind, All this novel is a Fantastic Roller coaster of Chaotic Proportions!
Make sure to Thank Editor-kun for refining the story to be the gem it is, and the Author for giving us such a great Gem of a story! Because this is a one in 1000 story that you are sure to enjoy every second!
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Top-tier Danmachi fanfic. This is what happens when Bell has future knowledge about Danmachi and sets his eyes on the big picture instead of being an Ais simp 24/7. The addition of elements of F/SN and FGO also makes the story more interesting (plus more waifus!)
Gonna leave it for a while and binge it all later cuz I NEED MORE. WAAAY MOOORE!!!
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One of the best novels I have read ever. It has ALMOST everything I want =P. Extremely recommended
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