A young man suddenly wakes up in a mysterious space after his fun goes seriously awry. He is soon greeted by a gorgeous and utterly naked goddess that offers to reincarnate him as a dungeon. He takes her up on the offer, but soon discovers something he didn’t expect. His avatar was a cute loli demon. Not only that, but he is soon joined by his partner-turned-child and a spoiled elf. As she starts navigating her new dungeon life she soon runs into an evil church and a dragon-worshiping cult. Join our new loli as she navigates a rather interesting world and maybe even finds love.
This is unfortunately an extremely frustrating story to read. On one hand, it's written well and the story, world and characters are interesting and unique and they all get fleshed out. That's the problem, they *all* get fleshed out, often in their own POV. The POVs also switch wildly, I mean, there's even a chapter with three different POV:s that are all telling their (at the time) own story.
From the synopsis and the first few chapters I get the impression that the new dungeon master is supposed to be the MC. However, their character isn't really that fleshed out and gets very little screen time after a while. Their character development is also painfully, excruciatingly, hair pullingly slow to the point of not making sense at all and it's absolutely infuriating to read in my opinion. And as soon as there is any semblance of improvement on their part, the POV switches for three chapters or so, often in the middle of a scene. I get the distinct feeling that the author doesn't know what they want to do with the MC and is therefore dragging out their character progression unnaturally to a mind boggling degree and often just leaves them out of the story completely (there's been a single small paragraph with MC in the last 7 chapters). The MCs point of view is often just related to dungeon management which isn't that interesting and strangely doesn't really impact the story that much.
By the time of writing this (chapter 74) MC has not yet interacted with their body in any s*xual way whatsoever, no masturbation or s*xual encounters. She *has* however started wearing extremely s*xual outfits with both nipples and p*ssy on full display. Something that turns her on, a lot. At this point it's just unfathomable that she hasn't at least touched herself with her being a lust demon that's constantly surrounded by s*x. It also feels like we've seen every other character have s*x except for MC. With Isekai being a genre with inherent self insert qualities it kinda feels like reading about all my friends having s*x while being in a massive dry spell.
I beg you author, for the love of god stop it with the pathetic MC angst already and give us something good s*xy scenes with them! It just feels stupid at this point!
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This story is written in a confusing and disjointed way, and not in the way that makes sense when you put it together. Even the wait for an individual chapter can cause you to forget what has been going on and have to reread the past few chapters to remember. The first twenty or so chapters are well written, but after that several new PoVs with no relation to what came before start to be introduced along with their own subplots adding to the already overstuffed narrative. The constant teases and foreshadowing eventually become frustrating after no payoff for anything fifty chapters in. Most of the cast are one-dimensional individuals with no noteworthy traits, including the protagonist. The world itself feels convoluted, with so many things completely biased towards females that it stops being interesting or funny. I also hope you like forced instant M2F, because it has happened no less than half a dozen times at this point. If more focus was put into who is supposed to be the main character and their surroundings, I can see an interesting story, but as it is I can't make heads or tails out of anything in this "story".
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Love the rewrite of this story. If you are coming over from the old don't be afraid it is a lot better at least in my opinion then before with enough being new that you don't feel like you are just rereading it.
If you are new and wondering if it is a good read yes it is. The story does well with fleshing out the world through secondary point of views; however to a few it could feel slow since it doesn't focus only on the main character. If you would happen to feel that way I understand and the story probebly not for you at this time but for me it does a wonerful job with world building and introducing charaters to the story. The story does well with majority of the s*xual content having it feel like a part of the story instead of just fanservice.
WARNING
There are parts of the story that isn't the best for everyone including rape so please read the tags since they are accurate.
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I'm just gonna start off by saying that this story is not for me, and you might enjoy it where I couldn't.
Now, let's start with the story; so far, chapter 81 or so, it still feels like nothing has happened. Sure you have the evil human empire, and you have a dragon looking for her lost priestess, but nothing specific as a goal for the story, nothing pushing it forward, making a lot of the progress the characters make seem sort of pointless for a lack of better words. The world itself is fine though, but I do have a few gripes with it that I will get into later in this review. The story also is a multi-Mc-pov type story, but for me, there are too many characters to keep track of, especially if you catch up to current release and have to read it one chapter at a time, even if op dropped like 5 chapters a day. It is just confusing tbh.
Moving on to the characters, I would go with the MC, but the MC that is the Dungeon, or you would think so because of the title, I feel is barely in the story, barely get any development. I feel like the story could use more of her as almost everything at this point in the story revolves around it/her. Most of the characters are fine though, they are well described, often times in too much detail though, and have nice little mini-arcs here and there.
The grammar in the story is good and I have no issues with it. So the story gets a bonus there.
Now, for my complaints about the story; let's start first with the people in this world, they are weird, and I don't mean because of the nudist thing, but more because everyone is as short as a 6-9 year old child (between 100-130 cm) which is just weird and makes all the s*x scenes seem really pedophilic for a lack of better words. I get liking lolis, and that is fine, but this is just too much. Also, the story just seem to hate men in general, like, I can get behind having a world mostly dominated by women or prefering to be a story with mostly girls, but all the guys in this story get turned into girls, and the rest of the MCs are all like "girls are best anyway, and men Re just filthy pigs." and as a guy, it gets really tiring to read.
Anyways, if you enjoy it, good for you, but this one is not for me sadly.
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Well written story with an engaging plot. And since people dont seem to be reading the tags, this story is written from the perspective of multiple characters there is not a primary protagonist. This story is one of the best gender bender stories on this site and is definitely worth a read.
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Great writing great story. But it has a major flaw of adding new perspectives and side stories every few chapters making it a mess to read.
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This story has some great worldbuilding to it. The way that the characters interact with each other is definitely interesting, and the lore of the world is something that is well written (especially when the interlude chapters are released).
I will say that it can sometimes be difficult to keep track of what certain characters are doing in the story. It also has some seriously dark moments that the characters in the story will go through, so be prepared for those.
Overall, I would say that this story would be a fun read for anyone that does not mind following more than one protagonist, and you do not mind reading some dark stuff that may happen in the story, then I would recommend that you check out this story.
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