Follow Derek on his journey as he is summoned to a fantasy land as a demon. Oh it'll start normal enough. Some humans here, some elves there, maybe a dwarf or two. But let's not be so limited! A dark elf futanari? A giantess who uses small men and women as living clothing via string? Angels who manipulate the innocent? Gender bender, aliens, fairies and fey, transformation, anthropomorphic creatures, slavery both wanted and unwanted, drunk oni's, tentacle pits, wars and royalty, hive minds and cults, and more and more!
It’d be easier to say what won’t there be on his journey really. And what a journey it will be. Make no mistake! Ready yourself for plots a plenty and life in ways you’ve never seen before.
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The story description and tags have promised much but delivered little. No gender bender so far. Multiple chapters dedicated to redundant information (from different perspectives, but the different perspectives offer no new information). This allows the author to really linger on things... like the recent rape scene. Three chapters on this so far. If you are really, really into sadism this might be your thing. I am not.
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The first 50, or so, chapters are really incredibly good. The comedy is way up there, for me, as comedy gold and the karma is incredibly satisfying. Without spoiling anything, my personal favorite part is it's take on a certain character architype, being in the wrong world, that it pulls off nearly to perfection. My only complaint is that there was a massive change to a character's personality, almost immediately after we're shown things from her perspective.
That being said, the arc I'm currently on is, frankly, boring and incredibly long. I had no interest at first because I didn't understand the situation, and when the situation is finally explained, I was already too tired to care. The few times I started to gain interest it was abruptly ruined by either an unenjoyable character dynamic, or a perspective change that I'd rather read the cliff notes for. Fixing it doesn't seem that hard though, luckily. You'd just have to
have the MC meet the people briefly before getting 'kidnapped'
alter H's dynamic with the MC a little
Overall 100% worth the read for the beginning 50 chapters. I just hope it starts to pick up soon and get back to that greatness.
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What I like about this story is how the MC isn't some copy-pasted, cliche perv archetype that constantly thinks with his d*ck and absolutely dominates everything. Rather, he's actually someone who's pretty realistic and level-headed with a good moral compass to him. Not an MC you'd usually expect in a s*xual world, but I rather like how he's reacting through everything in the story.
Also, rather than some sort of cliche ever-loyal succubus or whatever beautiful fantasy species as a first companion, the MC gets a trio of human companions. A Hero group, in fact! Yes, a demon's first companions are people from a Hero group! One of 'em almost killed him, too, so there is that! I honestly like how the author is not going down the usual overused interaction and companion routes that you usually see.
One is an isekai'd hero who got summoned out of the blue, with there being mysteries surrounding this matter. He's nice enough. Wouldn't hold back his sadistic teammate from physically and mentally assaulting the MC, though. But, at least he doesn't go out of his was to get aggressive with the MC and even tries to make the MC's life a bit better. Well, makes suggestions to. He still holds his friend in higher regard compared to MC, and that is reasonable. They just met and MC is a demon. Can't instantly be nice. He has his own loyalties. Also, he has his own worries.
The next one is the sadistic chick. Not going to spoil that much, but you'll end up understanding why she is the way she is. Definitely a dark back-story, so she's not all good up in the head. She's a sadistic jerk, but at least she's not a manhwa-young master kind of jerk. Just sadistic in an.... interesting way. I rather like her twisted interactions with the MC. Hahaha. A breath of fresh air!
Now, the last one is a priestess. She's the reasonable one out of the group and has been quite fair to the demon MC. She's the one acting as mentor and guide for our hero group companions. Just like the isekai'd hero, she's got a good head on her shoulders. No hidden twisted side. A good addition to MC's list of companion; someone who he can talk to normally.
The MC is definitely my favourite character of the story right now. Can't wait to see him develop more.
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This story is evolving very well so far. You all should definitely give it a try!
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Hmmmn, all the Tags for this story have yet to make an appearance and the story itself is of a complex/peculiar taste. As such not everyone will like this story.
However it isn't bad, infact the Feel of the novel overall has been pretty good so far. But it needs to pickup the pace somewhat...
This story feels like a slow burner that will need 300 to 400 chapters for it to reach completion, perhaps more.
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4.25 / 5 Stars.
First, if you're squeamish about physical and/or s*xual violence, STAY AWAY! This story doesn't have the *content warning* label slapped on chapters (probably bc nasty stuff happens so frequently) so let this being your heads-up.
tl;dr If you don't mind a well written story about a "regular joe" with a decent moral compass trying to make a sensible way through a brutal-as-all-get-out fantasy world, then this one's pretty interesting.
MC seems mostly reasonable and empathetic. He does do the whole "JD from Scrubs", staring into the distance while he's thinking through things, schtick but it's nice to see that he's got interiority and he's got his own thoughts about the situation even if there's not much he's able to do about things yet.
The supporting cast seems to have their own stories going on too, which is good to see.
The villains are waaaay over the top evil so far though, so buckle up for a bit of 1-dimensionality there, but no more so than in other stories.
Overall, if you have the stomach for it, it's a good read.
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I meeeeeeeean it's a good manuscript, would be nice to see the protagonist enjoy something for more than two and a half chapters and the writer has some questionable kinks, but in my fae court we don't kinkshame...
It has some elements a maiden like me finds unsavoury yellow and of bad taste, but the possibilities in the future are great and I hope that this tale receives more updates.
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The story is well written, but doesn't have a clear direction as of yet. I only advise reading if you're into psychological descriptions, Hella great on that department.
The characters are terribly believable. To the point that they're are all detestable. MC is too passive, Tyler is too naive, the other are also incredibly self centered. Everything paints a very realistic approach that is refreshing to the isekai genre.
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I had to say, this novel give me a roller coster of feelings. And I dont really sure it was the good one or the bad one.
There are many things that were fun. But many were also bad, one that really leave a bad taste in my tongue for reading such story.
But overall, for me, it was a good novel. Mostly enjoyable. And one that I will continue to anticipate the next chapters.
Tho sorry there are no "objective" details, cuz this is one of those "unique story" case and I'm pretty bad in writing.
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Easily one of the best things I've read I this site. The writing is clean and easy to understand, there is coherence and the story flow is really nice. Feels like there is a direction to the story and the writer knows what they are doing. Idk why people complain at there being bxb, when the tags pretty clearly say protag is bi tho. I even feel like there has been too little bxb in the story, but whatever. Congrats to the author tho, you've written an amazing story
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