Started out good but MC turned out to be an idiot and author makes MC fall into the new worlds roll of the female guy. &Nbsp;Dropped from too much idiot dumb stuff

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I feel like the writer is. Female writing how a male would think or a guy who doesn't interact with women that much. 

Mind you I'm only 30 chapters in of the 77 released chapters, but somethings are extreme... which I get but it's weird.  The reverse is kind of strange too because everyone wants to r the MC. Plus The world makes no sense. Men are physically stronger but they are looked at for needing protection and they can't fight...

I not hating this story.  I enjoy it so far but I feel that the writer went too exteam on the stereotypes gender roles  switching. Also get the feeling the writer wanted to do a yaoi or Yuri instead

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Hot smut, dumb protagonist, good syntax, aimless narrative, and with that it is just okay. Not a bad fap, it can be funny, but that's all it will ever be.

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The best gender reversal novel I ever read in my entire life, definitely recommend it, there was a bit of bad stories at first BUT past that, I couldn't let go of this series.

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This actually something new that I haven't seen before which is pretty rare as most books are quite repetitive so its really nice to see a new concept especially for a book like this, author keep up the good work.

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Really enjoy the story, though I have some recommendations if you want to do another like this in the future. 

If you want to alter the gender roles and drives of people so dramatically, alter their biology too. If you want women to see men as small and weak and frail, make women taller, with greater bone and muscle density and make men shorter with less muscle and bone density. If you want women to be more desperate for s*x and have males as the gatekeepers for s*x, lower male birth rates. Maybe not to absurd levels, but maybe 1 male for every 2 females. Introduce some scarcity.

That’s pretty much all I can say negative about this. Love the story. Definitely 5 stars for anyone interested in reading well written and unique smut.

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TLDR; A reverse world with a super horny braindead teenager makes dumb decisions and doesn't learn from them.

The beginning gives what you'd find typical in this type of story: the MC gets to experience what it's like to be an "e-girl." The news outlets show girls saying "I'm just saying it's nice to see guys gay for each other." Women commenting on one another's tightness size, how porn has extreme emphasis on the guy, etc.

So the setting takes anyone new to this story archetype by surprise in a way. Most of the same stories end up forgetting to take the setting seriously. And to whatsawhizzer's credit, he remembers.

Instead, whatsawhizzer forgets something more important. Main Character development. The main character complained about his life, suspecting girls wouldn't understand the hardships of a guy. He gets the result he wants. But reality teaches him the opposite: what it's like to be a girl. I should end the review here, but this would make it sound like a feminist perv fantasia and one with a semi-meaningful story.

And to some extent, that's what it is. However, it's done in a very, very awkward way. It feels more like the story is a slut simulator porngame with a female protagonist. In a lot of ways it really is, but with the occasional feminist political message.

I guess it's closer to a genderbender story if anything, since in a way his mindset is genderbent from the roles the world effectively assigned people.

Basically it'll say "See? Look how it feels to be on the other side of this? See? They're judging him as a slut because he walked in with makeup on his neck." Then you'll say "I mean, ok, he is a slut." "But society in these circumstances looks down on him." "yeah and he doesn't seem to give a sh*t that he's ruining his life and reputation." "Yeah! Just look at that! He's now going to suffer consequences for his actions! Look how unfortunate this is for him! He's going to get kidnapped!" "Yeah, he walked into a seedy bar at night with gangsters nearby.... underdressed and got drunk out of his mind. What a surprise he was taken advantage of, almost kidnapped and raped."

I guess in a way he doesn't give these stories the seriousness they deserve.

And you know... I wouldn't even be so bothered with this if the author just made the MC use 1% of his brain. The MC basically laughs off the fact that he was almost kidnapped and raped. He enjoys the s*xual harassment. The author treats very extreme circumstances with humor, which is a sharp contrast to his seeming desire to make a serious believable reverse world. Passed the intro during the locker room rape the MC endures, the MC briefly reminds himself that he should take care not to ruin his reputation, before brainlessly making the same mistakes as if he didn't advance as a character.

Oh, but it doesn't end there. The author gave the MC the ability to fight damn well, because he was brutally beaten in his youth by other guys. What happens? He gets into a battle with a middle schooler and barely wins. Despite the middle schooler being a boy, (girl in our universe.) This tells me the MC, would struggle to win a fight against a middle school girl or that the author forgot the level of violence the MC should be able to dish out.

Conclusion:

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I really loved the story so far. It looks promising and feels different. Especially the world setting! Nowadays it's hard to come by a story like this. Keep up the great job, appreciate your efforts. 

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I didn't start reading this story with much of anything for expectations.  In the end, or as of chapter 41, I found the story rather surprisingly enjoyable.  

There are a few gripes I have.  The MC, while appearing to analyze the gender role swap, still manages to be blandly hypocritical a couple times and I'm not sure if the author didn't see the hypocrisy or wrote it intentionally.  If it was intentional, I would have liked to see some indication of the intent, but probably mostly because I find blatant negligent hypocrisy frustrating.

Grammar is decent.  There are only a few mistakes (substituting Peak for Peek, for example).  Even though this tends to be a pet peeve of mine, it was definitely readable.

The MC is a teenager who had his whole world turned upside down, so he can be forgiven somewhat for his angst, but there may have been a bit more than necessary.  That being said, it's hard to have character progression if your character has no flaws from the start.  He does at times act in ways that gets other people in trouble and he lets them twist in the wind.  I'm hoping this trait is a growth opportunity rather than a continued theme.

The six sisters acting like dudes at the dinner table was hilarious and I'm not even sure why.  There are several gems like this sprinkled throughout the story and I thoroughly enjoyed them.  

The premise is interesting.  There is a good deal of introspection, as you can imagine, and it's written well enough that it didn't get boring for me.  There's a great deal of charm throughout that more than overshadowed the little gripes I had with the story.  

For those concerned that there is no family relations, the family side appears to be a slow burn as his and their boundaries slowly come down.  I can see how this can be frustrating for those who just want some spank fuel, so if you want immediate gratuitous family play, this may not be that story.  I tend to enjoy slow burn aspects of relationship building, so I consider this a plus.  There's enough other nookie to keep the smut tag relevant without devolving into a bad porno.  There's even a good bit of character growth with much of it, so it doesn't even qualify as gratuitous in many cases.

TL;DR This story is quite well written, fun, and interesting for a story with the 'smut' tag.  I had a few gripes, but overall it was surprisingly enjoyable.  Not quite 5 stars, but a solid 4 for me.

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The more you read the more disappointing it gets, at first it was a bit funny, the different perspective was neat aswell. But once the novelty of it runs out, its frustrating. MC just starts d*cking down every girl he can, reflects on himself, decides he wants more than just s*x and more fulfilling relationships, then he goes and does the exact same thing again. Tells himself s*x isnt everything, and he isn't invincible here just because its a different world then proceeds to make even worse decisions thinking with his lower head instead of his top one. Reflects again, says hes gonna be the man of the house, and for a moment it looks like hes actually going to give some thought on what to do, and then he goes and does even more outlandish sh*t and making poor decisions that even a brain dead person knows is wrong, or letting some very clearly suspicious sh*t fly by because apparently his brain just does not work. Only the bottom one does.  The moment he sees some tits, pu**y, or some perv even lightly brushes up against his d*ck, whether it be a childhood friends mom while hes studying at their place, a literal random stranger saying 'hey get in the car', on multiple occasions it was different groups of girls trying to rape him and he still complied willingly, so much so the girls who were there to gangbang him were thrown for a loop and confused by his enthusiasm. He gets treated like a slut, and he is one. 1000%. Its not even an ero novel where its like 'Yeah! Wooo! Bangin' everyone!' kinda bs, this one dresses it up as though hes thinking a lot on his actions, internal conflicts, resolution and reflections on actions, as though he is actually having or going to have character growth before doing even worse in just a couple of chapters. So it just gets more and more frustrating.  

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