The story as a whole is good, the characters are well presented (except Howks, I have a feeling that he was flattened as a character), what I have to tell is that, the grammatical side isn't very good, but it isn't the worst I have ever seen. If the grammar was better I would give this fan fic 5 stars.

The first chapters (I mean chapters 1-40) were interesting, but there, at some point the story began to be boring, and I almost dropped this, what held me was my curiosity and the relationship between MC and his girl friend.

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the chapters where 1-b and 1-a had lesson together (the one when the brainwashing kid is tested if he can be added into the hero course) are practically filler chapters, the only thing that was worthy reading were the dialogues between teachers and MC (My opinion) because they were the same as in anime or manga (I think, after the fisrt one I just skipped them)

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The motives of demons, angels, possession etc. Weren't very interesting at the beginning, but when I found out that Lucifer was from the serial, I had a big smile on my face, but the war would have more emotional impact if MC really had to oversee hell for eternity, or at last a few months; It would be very interesting to see what happened after the whole war, and how public reaction about his (mc) "death" looked like.

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So simple summarising everything:
characters - 5/5
grammatical side - 3/5
story - 4/5
my personal score for this fan fic as a whole 4/5.

It was enjoyable reading, but if the gramma was better it would be a lot better.

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