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Evolution God
Evolution God
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Lucifer Jackson was a 17-year-old high school student. Every day he would get bullied and oppressed by everyone in the school, even by teachers. One day, he gets run over by a truck, integrates with the System of the Evolution God and reincarnates into a world named Zylghen also known as The World Of Chaos. But why is it that it doesn't feel like it should have such a name?

I used the artwork from a guy named fire_dragon13. He does amazing artwork, and if he doesn't approve of me using his artwork as a cover for my novel, I will immediately take it down. Cover: https://weheartit.com/entry/290512286

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ActionAdventureFantasyIsekaiSupernatural
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Alternate World Antihero Protagonist Appearance Changes Dragons Evolution Fantasy Creatures Fantasy World Inheritance Level System Male Protagonist Non-human Protagonist Non-humanoid Protagonist Overpowered Protagonist Reincarnated into Another World Reincarnation
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      sordahon
      Status: c35
      Feb 5, 2020

      Wish Fulfilment power fantasy with thoughtless and reckless protagonist that doesn't have personality aside from 'muh powah'. Author should add tag 'insane protagonist' 'villain protagonist'.

      The person who ensured he gets reincarnated and gets powerful makes almost no sense from point of personality aside from that little special thing he is, which also makes no sense really.

      MC doesn't really interact with environment, there is almost no world building, only killing and getting stronger without brain. He is also a big hypocrite that hates bullies and arrogant people yet can't realise he became one manyfold worse. Genocidial insane maniac that only lives due to plot armor early on since none strong realised he started killing strong beings left and right, and when they did, he got cheats to survive. Disappointment.

      But to say at least some good points about the story I would say the only one is that protagonist is a dragon, nothing else to mention really.

      To make this better imo would be fleshing out MC personality, giving him brain, less XP killing like a genocidial moron, more interactions with other people than getting horny at 'innocent and pure' girl he has crush on that is certainly not so. He acts like some white knight for her.

      Forgot to add that not killing that 'eye' girl makes no sense as he doesn't like arrogance (hypocrite) yet doesn't kill her even when she smirks at him or wants to name him like a pet.

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      rodusk123
      Status: c29
      Feb 8, 2020

      No real story to this, maybe there will be development later on but I doubt it as it seems like the author hasn't really done much planning.

      The MC is bullied yada yada yada, he reincarnates and becomes a dragon and slaughters thousands of monsters and people with no remorse for some strength. He is OP for no reason whatsoever while putting in little effort as possible. Too many plotholes (just kidding there's almost no plot to be a hole for), too many situations that make absolutely zero sense. The author at one point even commented that the MC won't absorb human bloodlines when it got pointed out (cause he can absorb bloodlines from blood) as he wants to keep him human, then the next chapter he absorbs human bloodline.  Oh, also author likes to do time skip slaughters so basically kill thousands of beings in a sentence and surprisingly the MC doesn't get stronger. Everyone has similar personalities too.

      They all appear extremely arrogant and prideful then turn cowardly when they start to lose just like the MC. No characters are interesting as they are all 2D even some character introductions just happen spontaneously and destroy the little amount of flow the story had slowly built up.

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