Lucifer Jackson was a 17-year-old high school student. Every day he would get bullied and oppressed by everyone in the school, even by teachers. One day, he gets run over by a truck, integrates with the System of the Evolution God and reincarnates into a world named Zylghen also known as The World Of Chaos. But why is it that it doesn't feel like it should have such a name?
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Wish Fulfilment power fantasy with thoughtless and reckless protagonist that doesn't have personality aside from 'muh powah'. Author should add tag 'insane protagonist' 'villain protagonist'.
The person who ensured he gets reincarnated and gets powerful makes almost no sense from point of personality aside from that little special thing he is, which also makes no sense really.
MC doesn't really interact with environment, there is almost no world building, only killing and getting stronger without brain. He is also a big hypocrite that hates bullies and arrogant people yet can't realise he became one manyfold worse. Genocidial insane maniac that only lives due to plot armor early on since none strong realised he started killing strong beings left and right, and when they did, he got cheats to survive. Disappointment.
But to say at least some good points about the story I would say the only one is that protagonist is a dragon, nothing else to mention really.
To make this better imo would be fleshing out MC personality, giving him brain, less XP killing like a genocidial moron, more interactions with other people than getting horny at 'innocent and pure' girl he has crush on that is certainly not so. He acts like some white knight for her.
Forgot to add that not killing that 'eye' girl makes no sense as he doesn't like arrogance (hypocrite) yet doesn't kill her even when she smirks at him or wants to name him like a pet.
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No real story to this, maybe there will be development later on but I doubt it as it seems like the author hasn't really done much planning.
The MC is bullied yada yada yada, he reincarnates and becomes a dragon and slaughters thousands of monsters and people with no remorse for some strength. He is OP for no reason whatsoever while putting in little effort as possible. Too many plotholes (just kidding there's almost no plot to be a hole for), too many situations that make absolutely zero sense. The author at one point even commented that the MC won't absorb human bloodlines when it got pointed out (cause he can absorb bloodlines from blood) as he wants to keep him human, then the next chapter he absorbs human bloodline. Oh, also author likes to do time skip slaughters so basically kill thousands of beings in a sentence and surprisingly the MC doesn't get stronger. Everyone has similar personalities too.
They all appear extremely arrogant and prideful then turn cowardly when they start to lose just like the MC. No characters are interesting as they are all 2D even some character introductions just happen spontaneously and destroy the little amount of flow the story had slowly built up.
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A wet dream about power Leveling with no plot just a grand backstory about the gods that is used to server as a plot foundation.
MC was a 17y guy bullied, yada yada, he dies.
Now he is dragon and he kills everything that will give him xp, just like a mindless beast. He's not even evil bruh, just kills to get xp with 0 thought about the consequences or the mass murder he commits.
No character whatsoever, he just just gets the op abilities what he needs them and when he finds a strong enemy he becomes stronger than them because plot.
37 chapters of just the MC running and gunning with no real story to talk of, just that everything is happening because of some grand fate, of it's just a mask for the plot armor.
All in all, even tho this is a work done by a new author (as he stated himself) and is on Hiatus I'll give it a 2/5 maybe 1.99/5
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