I was once a normal persson, but I unfortunately died only to be transmigrated into a xianxia world as a disciple in one of the best sects in the world, I forged my own dao created a unique cultivation method and even became the grand elder of the sect.... But I died. Only to have reincarnated as the young master of xin clan in another xianxia world(?). Well it's not like I had many regrets in my previous life..... but I really should have.........
gone to the *beeep* that time
First and foremost, hats off to author for writing a novel. I know, I have tried and dropped it few chapters in. Now coming to review...
I like the idea of the story but the execution leaves much to desire. The first few chapters are full of grammatical and well as literal mistakes. Even author has accepted that, but apparently dropped revising them due to a poll (?). @Author please do revise it. They act as gateway to your story. This is the fourth time I started reading your story and the first time I read it completely.
Second is the constant POV switches, time jumps (?). It's like author knows what he wants to show but is not able to do so. Just having a line to split the views would make reading much easier. Especially the last few chapters are extremely chaotic. What's is happening, why it is happening, when it is happening... everything is up for question. Author might want to maintain the confusion, but this is chaos not planned confusion or hidden hints. His personality takes a uturn and author simply explains it in one line..."memeory fragments."
In the end, the story is more close to crack fic (I personally think it's a crack fic...) rather than a cultivation novel. Thats why being sort of lenient in rating....3/5.
It entertains. Good idea. Poor execution. Shabby grammar.
Oh and before I forget. Great art!
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The MC is hilarious. The art is 10/10. I recommend giving read till you get to first MC candidate if your debating to read.
Might add more if I ever remember something to add.
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An incredibly satisfying read.
I'll start off by saying that the grammar is good, any errors that do exist are minimal and didn't break my focus when reading.
This novel fits tropes within tropes and then some, it's a wonderful parody of Xianxia pulling aspects from all over the shop.
Reincarnation Transmigration Regression, the holy trinity are all present, even combinations are up for grabs with our MC notably being a Reincarnated Transmigrator who's done this song and dance once before.
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A little fast and light worldview but it is a promising one. It has the potential of a diamond but it depends on how the author will shape the traits of the characters, the cultivation system, karma, fate, heavenly way.
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