Dude this story is so amazing, just like your "This Young Master is not Cannon Fodder" it got me totally hooked! 😍 I also am amazed with the plot and world building which clearly shows  the story is from the "Journey to the West" but mixed it up a bit which is still awesome! Especially the Witch Clan became Titan Clan was a shock to me when I finally remembered they didn't exist in the original, I also loved your character development of the MC, not too much attachment of her past but still relies on the foresight while standing bravely against the unknown future.

I also liked the Immortal Cultivation System you made which is different from the original one.

Really loved the story, keep up the Good Work! 🥹

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I love this story and also probably not as original, I think it may even be better than "This Young Master isn't Cannon Fodder" simply because of the scale of things. I know the Author is following the origin story of cultivation and is giving it his own twist, so it may be somewhat of a fanfic but not really as the scale is just too big for that. I remember reading one story very similar to this one, but instead of one of the 3 pure ones, the MC was the ruler of the blood sea and the owner of the Red lotus. Totally different story. There is just so much going on that the Authors have to choose which aspect they even want to cover. Thanks for writing this. ≪3

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Truly amazing story, one of my favourite honghuang novels, honestly don't know why there are so few reader. Anyways it's a good read

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This novel is a fresh breath of air in this site especially on the cultivation genre. It kept me hooked from chapter one and I wish that the author would update more frequently.

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The chapters felt long and the writing style kept me engrossed. It nothing like typical cultivation novels. Good one to read.

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Albeit some of the details don't match what I've learned from dozens honghuang CNs but most basic concepts are suprisingly consistent. That is, pacing was too fast in past ten chapters as it has been half filled with explanations. Which is reasonable tbh, but I suggest to add more details in the conversations as well as some water in the middle to increase the chapter size. I would also like to suggest author to slow down a bit and concentrate on chapters' content and MC herself since there are more and more different POVs appearing, taking most of the screen time. Although I get that such choice is inevitable for the genre but it's hard to be invested in those short stories which do not let reader develop any emotional attachment (and it's probably quite confusing for new readers to keep track of).

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As far as quality goes for a cultivation novel this one is on the higher end. Before I knew it, I was already a couple dozen chaps into it. A great read.

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Thanks For The Story,

This is one of the best cultivation stories I have ever read, and I have read quite a number.

I Think I like this story more than even your "This Young Master is Not Cannon Folder" Story which is also one of my favourite cultivation stories.

Thanks For the good work.

Ps: I've never written a story before, I don't think I am any good at narrative or descriptive writing, any tips on how I can learn and get started.

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