Ye Tian travels through Douluo. His only relative, his sister, works as a maid in the Spirit Palace, and they only communicate with letters. After five years, she finally returns home.
Calculating the time, the Spirit Palace will be finished within three years, so Ye Tian mustered up his courage and said to his sister:
"Sister, Bibi Dong will die within three years, and the Spirit Palace will perish. When the time comes, the world will be in chaos. Stay here and don't go out!"
My sister was taken aback for a moment, then nodded in agreement.
Ye Tian: "This sister is weird!"
After some time, the beautiful sister smiled casually and said, "Stop pretending; let's have a showdown; I am Bibi Dong."
This is not my story and is written by a Chinese author. I came across this fanfic a few days ago, and it was one of the few decent Douluo fanfics out there, but it was really annoying to translate every page into English.
Machine translation is annoying, and translating every single page takes too much time. So I thought of translating this novel into English. I hope you like it.
It is not a perfect translation, as I am not a native English speaker myself, but it is somewhat bearable.
For those who want to read the original, the link is
https://m.uuks.org/b/51389/
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So far this is a good Soul Land FF translation. The MC is given a system that gives blueprints of some Earth technology for army warfare but at the same time Nerf's him to not become a powerful cultivator for 6 years [the story starts 3 years in]. The premise of the story is the MC has faulty memory's of his sister and confuses a main heroin as his sister making for an unforgettable start to this fun story. I like its concept due the the MC being so weak but still having an engaging Gold-Finger... Anyway give this a go! Harem-Fan Certified™
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I really tried to like this one but it steadily went down hill for me. It had a strong first couple of chapters then it falls straight into the usual chinese novel problem where everything revolves around the MC and every side character exists only to sing his praises or show off how cool or awesome he is. Each plot event also serves the same purpose. The problem is also made worse by the fact that a good chunk of the story is told from the side characters point of view.
What that leaves us with is a story that reads more like a poorly put together propaganda piece for the MC and his greatness.
The quality of the writing or translation also went down as the story progressed and I was having to slow down to try and parse out what was being said. It got really jarring.
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