It's only rapey smut, with no redeeming qualities. Grammar is pretty atrocious, as is the used language in general (like a child would write). Characters act very unlike their Canon counterparts, to the point that they are only named the same. This whole thing has as much relation to marvel as to a shopping trip to Aldi. 

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I like both the concept and the execution. Mostly.

I do have the opinion that the MC is a bit too control-crazy in the beginning few chapters of this story but it gets better towards the recent chapters, with the MC becoming more of a partner and less of a control freak. At least, for some of the hosts.

The main CON of this story is the premise of multiple barely-related stories going on at the same time. So far, there's only 2 main ones and 2 passive ones. But it's implied that there's gonna be 40 of them in total and I am not at all interested in keeping track of so many different plotlines in my head. It's the reason that I'm genuinely hoping that the MC would be blocked from entering or otherwise destroyed in some of the later worlds, just so there will be less to keep track of.

The R-18 scenes are actually a little boring since the girls themselves have almost little to no autonomy during the scenes. The MC always starts it, does it and ends it, all the while making the girls just stay there and take it. It would be nice to have the "hosts" be a little more independent during those scenes. As it is, it just feels like they're moaning dolls that he plays with (which fits with the theme but makes for a boring read).

As for the apparent "degenerate" R-18, it's not really all that bad. Some non-consent / dubious-consent, tentacles (tendrils?), technically non-human (cuz the MC is a blob who can take whatever shape he wants) and some bondage-play (not the same as BDSM). No weird fet!shes so far.

Overall, a good read and a decent progression fantasy. For a fanfiction, that is.

Also Mr. Author, please consider reformatting the story summary. Specifically, please consider making the second section sound more clinical instead of quirky like it is now. Just put all related R-18 tags in a numbered list with a more polite version of "don't like, don't read" instead of the block of text that it is right now.

Anyway, thank you for the story. It's a fun read.

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I have never seen a Marvel movie, so I was reluctant to start reading a fan fiction story about it, but I'm really glad I gave it a try.

The MC starts out pretty evil but isn't insufferable, just very selfish, and in time he mellows out a lot and begins to actually care about his hosts and forms emotional bonds. The grammar is fine. As for the story and other characters, I found them quite enjoyable, though I couldn't tell you how much of that is original and how much is drawn from the movies, since well, I haven't seen them.

Ultimately I'd say this is a pretty good read even if you're not into the whole superhero shtick.

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I like the concept and the execution is pretty decent as well. Grammar and spelling are a-okay and the release schedule is great. I'm super invested in all of the Earth timelines we've seen so far. Seriously, updates on any of them will have me reading the latest chapter in a heartbeat. Lovin' it.

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Kyah, I love symbiotes.

This is an almost perfect circumstances for this OP lifeform to grow, and I'm loving it. 

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It's honestly good, and quite make sense, n realistic. 

I like the gray tendencies of the characteristics, evil when needed and good when needed. The protagonist takes advantage of everything the world has to offer, with potential and acceptable limits. 

Don't listen to other reviews about rape and so on. Yes it is, but that's in the beginning and you should know, there is no better deal than what the MC offers to the host, be it the need for power, emotional, and hope, as well as the potential for the future. The MC offers everything more than what the host can imagine to the host, in other words the MC views the host as himself and his purpose. 

The threat level of the world is the level of the universe, the MC and the hosts are always growing, evolving, and maximizing themselves. 

I quite like their romantic plot, how the feelings for each other develop, and the depth it creates. 

So fantasy, action, and harem romance are all very good. Only readers who are innocent and have a stupid morality hero complex won't like this. 

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It's an enjoyable story if you're thick-skinned.

I myself have never been a fan of fanfictions, but to see something related to symbiotes and also have a progressive power system makes for an interesting, smutty storyline.

I recommend reading it, though just as the overview and tags suggest, there are some darker scenes in the story.

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I love the a lot of the ideas presented in this story. I have some issues with the story, which I won't dive into too much for fear of giving away plot. A solid read with a solid progression. I'm not super invested in the characters, but I am invested in the storyline.

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Meh... Premise was great in the beginning but as the story progressed it drifted from being about a symbiote and became a isekai with rpg system that made no sense. There's plenty of marvel in universe shenanigans that could be cobbled together to explain what is going on, there's no need to go to another genre for plot devices. Fight scenes written like a elementary schooler with anime undertones. Dropped at 80 something chapters when x23 suddenly became Thor from Ragnarok. 

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Just awesome it's the best marvel fanfic I've ever seen bro I've read upto 165 now just awesome.

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