The god things is that it is an interesting story, good concepts and a protagonist with charisma. Recommended reading? Yes.
The bad thing, the grammar, it needs a good revision and I am not an English speaker.
And finally a personal recommendation, The reading order should be:
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Prologue: Beneath the Stars
Side Chapter Planet 1: When Life Was Normal
Side Chapter Planet 2: A Hidden Arrow
Side Chapter Planet 3: Hostile Planet
Chapter 1: This Is Basically an Interrogation
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This way you get a little insight into the events that happen to the protagonist as an introduction without going into too much detail. The rest can be read well in the order defined by SH.
Grammar gets a bit better with time, but sometimes you still get wrong words that sound similar with author intend and using automatic proggrams to correct those does not work I guess (because it does not consider them mistakes maybe).
Characters are pretty good, the main plot is interesting and it's fun to follow MC jorney.
Combat is fun too and I liked the dialogue.
Litrpg part is pretty lackluster, but it does not make it bad, there is just no progression since MC is already high level with all the skills.
My advice for potential readers is to power trought first chapters and ignore bad grammar, its actually decent, I will still give it no more then 4 stars because of grammar and some minor pacing problems.
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The god things is that it is an interesting story, good concepts and a protagonist with charisma. Recommended reading? Yes.
The bad thing, the grammar, it needs a good revision and I am not an English speaker.
And finally a personal recommendation, The reading order should be:
This way you get a little insight into the events that happen to the protagonist as an introduction without going into too much detail. The rest can be read well in the order defined by SH.
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I have to agree with another reviewer "Hollex".
Its pretty good story with bad grammar.
Grammar gets a bit better with time, but sometimes you still get wrong words that sound similar with author intend and using automatic proggrams to correct those does not work I guess (because it does not consider them mistakes maybe).
Characters are pretty good, the main plot is interesting and it's fun to follow MC jorney.
Combat is fun too and I liked the dialogue.
Litrpg part is pretty lackluster, but it does not make it bad, there is just no progression since MC is already high level with all the skills.
My advice for potential readers is to power trought first chapters and ignore bad grammar, its actually decent, I will still give it no more then 4 stars because of grammar and some minor pacing problems.
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