Sadly it falls into the normal troupe of monster turning into a human way to soon, loosing a lot of what makes the story intresting. The MC also become OP fairly quickly (this can be a good thing if you like that aspect).

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TRNRLogan

Status: sidestory 3

May 10, 2021

Story and characterization are solid. Grammar could use another pass of editing. All the little graphics for the system are neat. Overall with a bit more polish this could be a great fantasy story.

But I'm dropping it. The reasons for that are

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that the recent little system update felt obtrusive to me and she gets, and most likely will always stay as, a humanoid form. I'm not in the mood for yet another reincarnated as a unique creature story where that draw is ditched aftee 20 chapters.

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I might pick it up again in the future though.

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Status: sidestory 4

Oct 28, 2021

not the best isekai but still, way better than kumo desuga?

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bigbootyboy

Status: chapter 61: taste of idyll

Feb 11, 2021

Even without editing, most chapters are readable. The story is enjoyable.

Sad that I didn't find this out earlier, but it was a very nice binge read. If you're still on the fence about it you should read it!

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Wkppp

Status: chapter 11: square one

Sep 8, 2020

At first glance you might think this novel as a common stone that you can find in the everywhere but once you open it you might be shocked that there's actually a hidden gem inside!.

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theeggsquared

Status: c38

Jul 24, 2020

From the title i've been turned off quite a few times but after reading this I must say it's like an experiment gone right

The chapters are pretty long, they are very well written with little to none errors and the story is pretty original which is quite suprising to be honest

To be honest one of my favorites

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Alhemyst

Status: chapter 37: arborealism

Jul 18, 2020

First review? Well, let's try to not mess it up. From the title you may think it'll be standard isekai and you wouldn't be terribly wrong, but that novel is so much more. Plot is quite normal, reincarnation and getting stronger story. What shines though it's world building. Author use a lot of complicated terms to describe "physics" of universe. I'm not native English user, so sometimes I need to look for explanation, but it's fun to do so. Side characters are well written, with ''living'' backgrounds. Also I liked the motive of letting reader choose with action MC should take, It was really something.I wonder for what author is practicing, making this "draft". If this is practice draft, then final work will be masterpiece.

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Indream

Status: chapter 81: ‘childish’ antics

Oct 1, 2021

It's just great. 5/5. Written after ch.81 was realesed.

I like the characters. Really well written, with personality to them (at least main cast). I love dynamics between Alicia and Alice. Newly acquired, ehm, "followers" are great.

Story is enjoyable. It was interesting from the start and now it seems like things are going on grander scale with what is going on. Can't wait to see what author will bring.

World is good. Not much of was revealed so far, since MC spended most of her time in the forest, but from what we got it's well thought out.

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LazyFlesh

Status: chapter 76: dreamcatcher

Jun 30, 2021

It is pretty good, liking it so far. Writer needs to learn to use more commas. Upload schedule is decent, and writer interacts with the commentators a decent amount. Honestly, it is getting weirder and weirder at this point,

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and now with the major lucky chance of becoming close with the void, which is basically "chaos" in other stories,

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I expect this to turn into something that slightly resembles kuma desu, ni ka soon. Plot does seem to deviate later though.

I am not an expert reviewer and I contradict myself sometimes. Do not take this review to heart

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kht2000

Status: chapter 74: vow of secrecy

Jun 12, 2021

The grammar made it a bit confusing for me to read at first. But that improves as the story goes on, and was able to enjoy it quite well (~~especially after that certain reader caught up with the story~~) . I also had to pull up my dictionary quite a few times since the author likes to use not very common words but that might just be because I am not a native English speaker.

The text formatting often gets wonky. And no, reading on Google Docs with my phone is not exactly a fun experience for me, so, I am not going to do that. Tho, I have to admit that I often had to open Google Docs just to view the graphs in details (Stoopid imgur website wouldn't let me zoom in). The graphs are really well made. I can see the author put a lot of effort into that.

The world building is quite good (although there are also tedious chapters of only world building). I especially enjoy the parts where the MC experiment skills with his knowledge of Physics concepts. The characters are also well developed too.

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Llynbel's background came out of nowhere tho.

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Overall, this is a solid 4 from me. If you take some time fixing the grammar errors from the first few chapters, I honestly think you can drop the "draft/writing practice" thing from the title.

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