This story dreams of one day reaching a level where it can be called garbage. The dialog is painful to read. The MC and everyone around him never stop the love fest of calling him a genius.

The worst part about it is the author tries to build this world where the MC brings all of these modern inventions into a medieval setting and revolutionizes the world, but he put no thought whatsoever into what it takes to produce these items. Apparently, you can get a blacksmith to make a pocketwatch by just drawing a picture if one. We're talking about a world that doesn't seem to have a working knowledge of the gear. Materials manufacturing for springs weight and balancing for moving parts, nope invent the clock and wristwatch in the same day and you can get it produced in three days. It'd be one thing if this were a magical word with dwarves that can just make anything, but this isn't even a premodern world with standardized parts.

Additionally, the author does minimum research on how the things he "invents" work, simply stating one or wo points of something and skipping key details, and getting some things wrong. 

All of this would be somewhat tolerable if the dialog wasn't soooo bad. Everything they say is clumsy and hamfisted.

Don't waste your time on this, if you are older than about 12.

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