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Rising from the Ashes [A Dark Reincarnation Fantasy]
Rising from the Ashes [A Dark Reincarnation Fantasy]
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Amber dies and is reincarnated in Nereid, a medieval fantasy world where mana is present in every being. Fueled by a boundless thirst for magic and adventure, she begins her journey of discovery. She is eager to learn all she can about this world, its magical abilities and creatures, and how she can use her newfound powers to their full potential.

However, fate has different plans for Amber as a tragedy strikes, shifting her priorities. Her thirst for magic and adventure is now accompanied by a burning desire for truth and justice. She faces numerous obstacles along the way, including political scheming, powerful enemies, and the challenge of mastering her own magical abilities. Despite the dangers she faces, she remains determined to uncover the truth behind the tragedy and bring those responsible to justice.

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Rising from the Ashes is my first try at writing a book, so I'd appreciate any kind of feedback regarding the story or writing. Note that the first few chapters might be goofy, but i hope it get's better as i become more used to writing. My story starts out a little bit slow, as reincarnation stories usually do, but it should pick up relatively quick.

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ActionAdultAdventureFantasyGirls LoveIsekaiMaturePsychological
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Abusive Characters Academy Age Progression Antihero Protagonist Aristocracy Beautiful Female Lead Character Growth Complex Family Relationships Cruel Characters Dark Death of Loved Ones Doting Older Siblings Dwarfs Elemental Magic Elves Fantasy World Fast Learner Genius Protagonist Gore Heartwarming Magic Maids Pragmatic Protagonist Siblings Care Sword And Magic
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  1. 19. NightmareFeb 27, 2023
  2. 18. Banquet pt. 3Feb 25, 2023
  3. 17. Banquet pt. 2Feb 23, 2023
  4. 16. Banquet pt.1Feb 21, 2023
  5. 15. Way back homeFeb 20, 2023
  6. 14. ScavengersFeb 19, 2023
  7. 13. Felling the BeastFeb 18, 2023
  8. 12. Joining the HuntFeb 18, 2023
  9. 11. Plans for the futureFeb 17, 2023
  10. 10. New TeacherFeb 17, 2023
  11. 9. Request pt. 2Feb 16, 2023
  12. 8. RequestFeb 15, 2023
  13. 7. Advanced MagicFeb 15, 2023
  14. 6. Studying, Training.Feb 14, 2023
  15. 5. MagicFeb 14, 2023
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      MalbecRage
      Status: 15. way back home

      The story and writing have been pretty decent so far. Avoids some of the major tropes we see in such stories where the MC becomes OP really quickly. Certain side plots haven't quite panned out or were dropped seemingly pretty quickly such as the step mother and half brother. Perhaps enhance the plot here, introduce relatives from all sides paternal and maternal.

      The father's character is too one dimensional as well where he is always stern and buried in paperwork. The author really should avoid character tropes here. Rich and powerful people delegate. A CEO and president isn't buried in paperwork like Japanese anime suggests. They socialize and mingle to increase their standing and engage in politics through courts, balls, and parties.

      The MC's personality is also a bit weird where she sometimes acts as a child and sometimes an adult seeking attention and validation. This seems inconsistent so author needs to address this. Perhaps clarity on MC past?

      World building so far is slow and steady which isn't bad, plus I like the whole show and not tell approach thus far.

      So far been happy with story despite the minor flaws. Hopefully author keeps the pacing right and avoids expositions or slowing the story plot pacing to that of paint drying.

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