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Total Views (Chapters): | 27,170 |
Average Views: | 1,509 |
Word Count: | 46,312 |
Average Words: | 2,573 |
Pages: | 169 |
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This is subpar at best. The character including the main character are not people and even fail to be stereotypes, they are akin to puppets dancing to the whim of a puppeteer who doesn't know what they are doing. The concept is interesting but the execution is so abysmal you cannot in good consciousness call this a story with a plot or theme or any actual character motivations. The setting is just a couple of cliche's smashed together without any thought on how they would or should mesh.
If you would want to read this you would need to shut your brain down for the absurdity that happens. A couple of examples of this right off the bat. The main character act's like an adult even though she's supposed to be 3. Another example, a 3-year-old child walks into town BY HERSELF and no one bats an eye or asks where her parents are.
In short, I feel no passion behind this project to even make it passable to read. If you thought it was interesting I'm sorry to dissapoint you but don't waste your time.
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